FCE Writing part

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FCE Writing part
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LETTER
QuestionYou have seen the following job
advertisement in your local youth centre.
  ACTIVITY CO-ORDINATOR WANTED!(Weekends only) Would you like to work with young children aged 5-11? Do you have lots of energy? Are you an excellent swimmer? If the answer to these questions is 'yes' then we want to hear from you. Our Children's Club is looking for someone to be in charge of a group of 10 children to teach them swimming and to do a range of other activities. Please send a letter to Mrs Sykes saying why you are suitable for the job.
Write your letter of application to Mrs Sykes.
(around 120-180 words).
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Dear Mrs Sykes, I am interest 1 in your
advertisement showed 2 in the local youth
centre and I would like to apply for the post of
Activities Co-ordinator. I am 18 years of age
and I am used to working with children because I
babysit my neighbor's sons regulary. I train in
the gym twice a week and I often go hiking to the
countryside with my friends. In addition to this,
I have a lifesaving certificate and have enjoyed
swimming since I was a child. My reason for
applying for this position is that I am keen on
combining my experience in swimming with my wide
knowledge of the countryside which I think it
will be interesting for the children. I would be
avairable to attend an interview on any day at
your earliest convenience. Yours
sincerely. PAULA M. SIBILIN
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• Feedback This is a good letter, which matches
  the points in the job description. There are a
  couple of spelling and grammar mistakes, but on
  the whole the sentence structure and register is
  very good.Well done, Paula!