Title: MUG shots
1MUG shots
- in 1980, ronald reagan becomed the most oldest
president ever sworn into office. - Rules
Capitalization, adjective (comparative/superlative
), verb (irregular)
2Creative Minds at Work
- Thinking Outside of the Box
3November 2, 2009
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary words and definitions
- Mini-lesson Interjections
- Adverb worksheet
- Journal
- Reader Response
- Painting Poetry
4Journal
- You awaken one morning and find you have turned
into an animal. You have the same mind but a
different body. What animal are you? Describe
your day. (at least 6 sentences)
5- TREPID (Latin) afraid, disturbed
- Intrepid (adj) bold unafraid brave courageous
- Trepidation (n) state of fear or alarm dread
- REV (Latin) to fear, respect
- Irreverent (adj) not showing proper respect
- Revere (v) to hold in awe worship admire
respect - FORMID (Latin) to fear
- Formidable (adj) difficult to overcome
intimidating daunting - SPEC/SPIC (Latin) to see
- Conspicuous (adj) standing out unusual obvious
- Despicable (adj) deserving hatred or disgust
vile - Respective (adj) corresponding to each person or
thing in a series particular
6Interjections
- word added to a sentence to convey emotion. not
grammatically related to any other part of the
sentence. - I heard one guy say to another guy, "He has a
new car, eh?" - I don't know about you but, good lord, I think
taxes are too high!
7Introductory Interjections
- always followed by a comma
- Yes, I will make sure your request is approved.
- Ouch, that hurt!
- Oh no, I forgot that the exam was today.
- Though common in speech, interjections should
be used sparingly and never in formal papers.
8Coordinating conjunction
- joins two sentences elements that have identical
functions. - and but or for
- nor yet so
- FANBOYS
9Correlative conjunctions
- eitheror neitheror
- not onlybut bothand
- whetheror
10Subordinating conjunction
- though after because
- if where than
- since as unless
- before that though
- when whereas
11Conjunction Adverb
- however therefore moreover
- further then consequently
- accordingly also thus
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12- In what type of sentence is a coordinating
conjunction found? - In what type of sentence is a subordinating
conjunction found?
13Excerpt from Staying Fat for Sarah Byrnes
14- First paragraph is ALWAYS your opinion. Did you
like the reading? Did you understand it? Did
you like the character? Then, back it up! Why?
Did a quote stick out? Did you love the setting?
There is no wrong or right answer this is simply
your opinion! - Second paragraph is does this relate to you or to
the real world? Are teenagers really like this?
Do you think this is realistic? Back it up!
Remember, this is your opinion. Who cares what
your friend says, this is your paper and your
opinion. - What would you do for a friend? What are some
characteristics of a good friend to you? Do you
think any of your friends would do something for
you, even if it is not that extreme?
15 16- First paragraph is ALWAYS your opinion. Did you
like the reading? Did you understand it? Did
you like the character? Then, back it up! Why?
There is no wrong or right answer this is your
opinion! - Second paragraph is does this relate to you or to
the real world? Are teenagers really like this?
Do you think this is realistic? Why or why not?
Back it up! Remember, this is your opinion. Who
cares what your friend says, this is your paper
and your opinion. - Third paragraph is what was your first rock
concert? Can you remember the smells, the
people, the food, etc.? Do you still have your
ticket? When you read this again, what do you
see? A concert you went to or something else
like a music video?
17Free Verse
- No rhyming, rhythm, tempo, line rules
- Can be how ever you want the poem
- My only rules are at least three lines and the
title of the paint chip somewhere in the poem
18Winter Sea Green
- Dark ocean water on a wintry day
- Color of a sea captain's hat in a portrait
- Color of a boat through the fog
- Depressing shade as the ship sinks to the depths
of the ocean floor - The color of the waves thrashing against the wood
of the ships foundation - Color of the sea in a painting
- First sight of land through the fog
19- Winter sea green
- is the dark ocean water
- on a wintry morning,
- the color of the thrashing waves
- against the ship-
- during a wintry storm.
- The shade of the ship
- peaking through the morning
- fog
- The color the ship turns
- as it sinks to the depths
- of the ocean floor,
- And the dream of the first
- sight of land that never was.
20- Frosted Gold
- is the skeletal forms of golden rod
- on a wintry morning
- the color of yellowed love letters in an
- attic,
- of the crumbling pages of old books.
- Its the color of afternoon light
- in February,
- or the ochre- tinged wallpaper
- in a farmhouse bedroom
21MUG shots
- Fossils of fishes, insects, and reptiles can bee
found in many places. - Rules
Plurals, using the right word
22November 3, 2009Objectives 1.1, 1.2, 4.2, 5.1,
5.2, 6.1, 6.2
- MUG shots
- Journal
- Vocabulary check and exercise
- Conjunctions/adverbs worksheet
- Mini-lesson sentence types/finish conjunction
notes - Reader Response Rock Concert
- MUG shots Quiz (2/4)
- SSR (2/4)
- Painting Poetry
23Journal
- It was blue and round. It resembled a
- Fit this somewhere in at least 5 sentences and
underline it when you use it.
24Sentence Typesreallyreallyquickly
- Simple A simple sentence, also called an
independent clause. - Compound contains two independent clauses joined
by a coordinator. - Complex an independent clause joined by one or
more dependent clauses. - Compound-Complex at least two independent
clauses and one or more dependent clauses
25Sentences you should know but for some reason you
do not know
- Some students like to study in the mornings.
- I tried to speak Spanish, and my friend tried to
speak English. - When he handed in his homework, he forgot to give
the teacher the last page. - The dog lived in the backyard, but the cat, who
thought she was superior, lived inside the house.
26MUG shots
- Beutiful, fern-like plants been captured in
stone, to. - Rules
Verb, spelling, using the right word
27November 4, 2009Objectives 1.1, 1.2, 4.2, 5.1,
5.2, 6.1, 6.2
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary sentence check/quiz
- Journal
- MUG shots Quiz (1)
- SSR (1)
- Grammar Review packet
- Mini-lesson Prepositions/sentence types
- Finish painting poetry (1)
- Picture writing
28Journal
- What would the world be like if it was just black
and white? - (at least 5 sentences)
29Preposition
- a word that relates a noun or pronoun that
appears with it to another word in the sentence
30MUG shots
- Beutiful, fern-like plants been captured in
stone, to. - Rules
Verb, spelling, using the right word
31November 4, 2009Objectives 1.1, 1.2, 4.2, 5.1,
5.2, 6.1, 6.2
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary sentence check/quiz
- Journal
- MUG shots Quiz (1)
- SSR (1)
- Grammar Review packet
- Mini-lesson Prepositions/sentence types
- Finish painting poetry (1)
- Picture writing
32Journal
- What would the world be like if it was just black
and white? - (at least 5 sentences)
33Preposition
- a word that relates a noun or pronoun that
appears with it to another word in the sentence
34Prepositions Objects of the prepositions
Near Me
Before The storm
According to Her
Examples near the tall, gently swaying trees
on account of the rain
in the stands
35MUG shots
- Hole or partial skeletons can be useful to
scientists - Rules
Using the right word, end punctuation
36Three Steps to Effective Definition
- Tell readers what term is being defined
- Present clear and basic information
- Use facts or examples readers will understand
37words to choose from
- Honesty
- Love
- Family
- Truth
- Fear
- Happiness
38Choosing a Definition
- Choosing a definition is a key step in writing a
definition essay. - You need to understand the term before you can
define it for others. Read the dictionary, but
don't just copy the definition. Explain the term
briefly in your own words. - For example, you could write forever on the term
"love." To limit it, you would write about either
"romantic love," "platonic love," or "first love."
39Personal Experience
Sentence
Every light on in the apartment
The fear struck me as the shadow was approaching.
Fear
Horror Terror Panic Fright
The Grudge The Ring It by Stephen King
Synonyms
Other ways of knowing
40Thesis Statement of a Definition Essay
- The thesis statement usually identifies the term
being defined and provides a brief, basic
definition. - (term) (basic definition)
- Assertiveness is standing up for your rights.
41MUG shots
- Athens, a city in greece named after athena, the
greek goddess of war and wisdom. - Rules
Sentence fragment, capitalization
42November 9, 2009Objectives 1.1, 1.2, 6.1, 6.2
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary words and definitions
- Journal
- HUGE grammar review
- Go over
- Chart for vocabulary tomorrow, POS test Tuesday
(4) and Thursday (1/2), Vocabulary test Friday,
Novel Pages due 11/19 or 11/20, and wikispace by
Sunday
43- OCUL (Latin) eye
- Inoculate (v) to protect against disease, error,
or harm - Ocular (adj) having to do with the eye
- TOL (Latin) bring upwards lift
- Extol (v) to praise glorify
- MISS (Latin) send
- Omission (n) the act of leaving out or
neglecting - Submissive (adj) tending to obey or yield
- CLOS/CLUD (Latin) to close off to shut
- Cloister (v) to shut away isolate
- Disclose (v) to reveal make known divulge
- Seclude (v) to put in a private place to hide
44Journal
- Describe the picture on the next slide.
- (at least 7 sentences)
- BE CREATIVE
45(No Transcript)
46MUG shots
- In Greek myth, centaurs were half man and half
horse apparently, that did not seam totally weird
too people back than. - Rules
Using the right word, run-on sentence
47Journal
- Most people are born with five senses- sight,
hearing, touch, taste, and smell. If you had to
give up one sense the rest of your life, which
would you pick, and why? (at least 6 sentences)
48November 10, 2009
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary check and worksheet
- Journal
- Grammar review
- 4th period test
49Journal
- Describe the picture on the next slide without
telling the reader it is a tree. - (at least 9 sentences)
- BE CREATIVE
50(No Transcript)
51- Almond Branches in Bloom, San Remy, c.1890
- by Vincent van Gogh
52MUG shots
- In japan its considered good luck to cross the
path of an black cat. - Rules
Capitalization, apostrophe, adjective (articles)
53November 12, 2009
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary
- Parts of Speech test
- SSR when finished with the test
54MUG shots
- Wow people in the world drink more than
260,000,000 glasses of soda every day - Rules
Numbers, commas (interjections), end punctuation
55November 13, 2009
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary Quiz
- Journal
- POS (4th)
- Reader Response Decision Time, Mr. Maxwell
- Finish notes and start writing paper
- Write essay!!
56Journal
- Free write
- (at least 10 sentences)
57- Decision Time Mr. Maxwell
58- First paragraph is ALWAYS your opinion. Did you
like the reading? Did you understand it? Did
you like the character? Then, back it up! Why?
Did a quote stick out? Did you love the setting?
There is no wrong or right answer this is simply
your opinion! - Second paragraph is does this relate to you or to
the real world? Are teenagers really like this?
Do you think this is realistic? Why or why not?
Back it up! Remember, this is your opinion. Who
cares what your friend says, this is your paper
and your opinion. - 3rd paragraph- What would you do in that
situation? How would you respond to the
warnings? Would you chance being called out for
telling or was this something to tell
administration? Friends change as you all
progress through high school. You change too!
59MUG shots
- Aesop the writer of such famous fables as The Fox
and the Grapes were a Greek Slave. - Rules
Quotation marks, commas (appositives), s-v
agreement
60November 16, 2009
- MUG shots
- Vocabulary words and definitions
- Journal
- POS slide- name POS
- Body slide
- Reader Response
- Peer edit/review
61- TERM (Latin) end, limit
- Indeterminate (adj) not clear not fixed
indefinite - Interminable (adj) seeming never to end
endless unceasing - LIM (Latin) boundary threshold
- Subliminal (adj) below the level of
consciousness unconscious - ARCH (Greek) ruler to be first
- Anarchy (n) lack of order or control chaos
- Archaic (adj) dating back to a much earlier
time ancient obsolete - Matriarch (n) female head of a family
- MERS (Latin) to sink
- Emergent (adj) just coming into being new
- Immerse (v) to completely cover with liquid
plunge
62Journal
- An epitaph is a sometimes humorous saying or poem
engraved on a headstone. - For example
- Here lies the body of our Anna
- Done to Death by a banana
- It wasnt the fruit that laid her low
- But the skin of the thing that made her go.
- What epitaph would you want on your headstone?
Would it be funny? Sweet? Serious? Write an
epitaph.
63- Darryl likes to frolic in the strawberry fields
in May. - Kawane and Ricky jump rope together.
- The rushing train came out of no where and
arrived at the station very early. - At the end of the day, Dylan tells us he can, in
fact, play football. - Kaylin thinks he will be sent to the office.
- Kendra and Amber are talkative teenagers.
64- Darryl likes to frolic in the strawberry fields
in May. - Kawane and Ricky jump rope together.
- At the end of the day, Dylan tells us he can
play football. - Kaylin thinks he will be sent to the office.
- Kendra and Amber are talkative teenagers.
65HOOK The Introduction
- Techniques to begin a piece of writing
- A thought-provoking question to make the reader
wonder - A funny story or personal anecdote to set a
humorous or individual tone - A list of main points to introduce the topic in a
serious, logical, and straightforward manner - A dramatic or eye-opening statement
66HOOK continued
- First sentence in the second paragraph should be
your thesis statement - What are you trying to tell the reader? Who is
your reader? Purpose? - Add a few sentences to explain the topic in
general terms and tie in the previous paragraph
so it all CONNECTS! -
67LINE The Body of the Paper
- Organizational Options
- Organize by Content List all the important
things you know about your topic (create
subcategories) and explain them in the order of
importance or logical sequencing - Organize by Perspective For a persuasive piece,
group all arguments in favor of an opinion and
then group all arguments against the opinion
68 69- First paragraph is ALWAYS your opinion. Did you
like the reading? Did you understand it? Did
you like the character? Why? Did a quote stick
out? Did you love the setting? This is simply
your opinion! - Second paragraph- does this relate to you or to
the real world? Are teenagers really like this?
Do you think this is realistic? Why or why not?
Back it up! Remember, this is your opinion. - 3rd paragraph- Do you think something like this
could happen at our school? Was there a time
when you thought something silly may get out of
control or did get out of control? It may not be
as big as a ring fight, but something people
could not control? Explain.
70Essay Revision Strategies
- Identify the main idea in each paragraph. Write
it in the margins. Look at the order of ideas in
your essay. Do they CONNECT from one to the
next? - Identify the thesis statement in your second
paragraph. Is it specific enough? - IN THE SECOND PARAGRAPH Look for the word many
or a lot. These words are VERY generic, and
means you have PLENTY of examples to back it up.
Try to be more specific with your information.
71Essay Revision Strategies
- Underline or highlight the first three words of
each sentence in your essay. - Do you have the same words starting sentences
that are close together? Does it sound like a
broken record? - Revise sentences that have similar beginnings so
you have a variety of sentence introductions.
72Essay Revision Strategies
- Read through your essay and circle these words
- You
- Your
- My
- Me
- I
- REMOVE these words from your essay!
- Read through your essay and circle these words
- Things
- Stuff
- A lot
- REVISE your sentences so you are giving specific
information, not general statements.
73The Small Shell Game
- Write a Precise description and give an exotic
name as a title - (Ex Boldly Beautiful)
- You have 20 minutes to be as descriptive as
possible with your groups shell. (You dont
finish because you are goofing off, then you
dont participate) - We will tape the descriptions to the board and
each team has to match the description with the
correct shell. - This is a competition. Which team is better at
precision? Which team is better at perception?
74What type of apple?
- Write a Precise description and give an exotic
name as a title - (Ex Luscious Red)
- You have 20 minutes to be as descriptive as
possible with your groups apple. (You dont
finish because you are goofing off, then you
dont participate) - We will tape the descriptions to the board and
each team has to match the description with the
correct apple. - This is a competition. Which team is better at
precision? Which team is better at perception?
75MUG shots
- columbus discovered america sailing West from
spain in 1492 while trying to reach india. - Rules
Comma (to separate phrases and clauses),
capitalization, misplaced modifier
76November 17, 2009
- How to paper
- POS worksheet
- Sea Shell Game and Apple Game
77Journal
- What is your opinion about the possibility of
life on other planets? Do you need to see it to
believe it, or do you believe that in a universe
as vast as ours, alien life must exist? Write on
the topic with the sentence, - I believe (dont believe) there is life on other
planets because - (at least 6 sentences)