Grammar Review 1

1
Grammar Review 1
2
Errors you should not make

• Tense and agreement.

3
Subjunctive

• He wanted to find other people to substitute me.
  Without director's rejection against this
  proposal, I have been fired already.
• I would feel better if he was singing a lovely
  lullaby with soft voice, but anyway, his voice
  was not charming at all, and even kind of harsh
  to my poor ears.

4
Article, Tense Diction

• Making choices is one experience that everyone
  will encounter in the daily life.
• My performance in TV drama,"Fly Me to the Moon,"
  brings me a lot of new experiences, including
  making many good friends, improving my acting
  level, realizing what world is like outside the
  campus and family, etc.

• Making choices is one experience that everyone
  encounters in daily life.
• My performance in the TV drama," Fly Me to the
  Moon," brought me a lot, (of new experiences,)
  including the many good friends I made and
  improvement of my acting. Most importantly, I
  got to realize what the world is like outside
  (the) campus and my family.

5
SS or Sentence Structure Run-On

• The more surprising thing is he lives in Boston
  which is the place I would go every summer, and
  his father teaches music composition in Berklee
  College of Music which is the school I had
  already apply and would enter after I graduate
  from college!