Unit Two : Use Active Voice Frequently

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Unit Two Use Active Voice Frequently
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• Modification of the heuristics was made by
  Lacksonen and Enscore (1993) to solve the dynamic
  layout problem.
• Revised Lacksonen and Enscore(1993) modified
  the heuristics to solve the dynamic layout
  problem.

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• Minimization of total operating costs is achieved
  by a planning horizon.
• Revised A planning horizon minimizes total
  operating costs.

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• A description of the layout cost evaluation
  method is made by introducing the following
  notations in this section.
• Revised This section introduces the following
  notations to describe the layout cost evaluation
  method.

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• Precise measurement of neural networks by
  practitioners is a heavy emphasis of computer
  vision systems.
• Revised Computer vision systems heavily
  emphasize that practitioners precisely measure
  computer vision systems.

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• Numerical analysis is performed in this study on
  the effects of the inflation rate and the
  deterioration rate on stock inventory.
• Revised This study numerically analyzes how
  inflation and deterioration rates affect stock
  inventory.

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• The manager can be assisted by the proposed model
  so that the order size can be precisely
  determined.
• Revised The proposed model can assist the
  manager in precisely determining the order size.

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• The temperature is increased by uncontrollable
  factors, as indicated in the experimental
  results.
• Revised Experimental results indicate that
  uncontrollable factors increase the temperature.

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• The proposed model can be extended in a future
  study so that more realistic assumptions can be
  incorporated.
• Revised A future study can extend the proposed
  model to incorporate more realistic assumptions.

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• A more detailed description of the three design
  types is provided in Kackar and Phadke (1991).
• Revised Kackar and Phadke (1991) describes the
  three design types in more detail.

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• The GRG algorithm may be difficult for users with
  limited statistical training to implement.
• Revised Users with limited statistical
  training may have difficulty in implementing the
  GRG algorithm.