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Feedback

• Deliverable 3
• Spring 2004

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Scores For Deliverable 3

• BIG 42 points Extremely good Team Page but
  not for here. Cover Letter and Executive Sum
  totally missed the point. The cover page was
  awesome, but the titles were all off! Good work
  plan.
• Dynamic Data Revolution 45 points Extremely
  good Team Page BUT not for here. Exec-Summary
  had no CONTENT. Very impressive look and feel!!
  Good workplan.
• FIST 43 points Cover letter started out great,
  but then missed the point and misrepresented what
  you did. This impacted the Exec Summary as well.
  Wrong ordering. Good workplan
• IDS 42 points Very good Team Page!! Cover
  Letter and Executive Sum totally missed the
  point. In the cover page the titles were all off!
  Good workplan.
• Infinite Analysis 44 points Outstanding Content
  cover letter and exec sum still need work.
  Wrong ordering. Good workplan.

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Bottom Line

• The Cover Letter provides
• CONTEXT
• The Executive Summary provides
• CONTENT

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Bottom Line

• BIGs design and layout for their cover letter is
  worth knocking-off, its great.
• Cover page, any ideas?