Unit Four : Create Sentence Parallel in Structure and Meaning

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Unit Four Create Sentence Parallel in
Structure and Meaning
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• It is a fact that engineers select an appropriate
  variable and the transformed observations are
  treated as though they are normally distributed
  with a constant variance.
• Revised It is a fact that engineers select an
  appropriate variable and treat the transformed
  observations as though they are normally
  distributed with a constant variance.

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• Those methods neither require previous knowledge
  of how the variables are distributed nor are the
  censored data stipulated to be available.
• Revised Those methods neither require previous
  knowledge of how the variables are distributed
  nor stipulate availability of the censored data.

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• Experimental design is used in this method to
  arrange the design parameters and noise factors
  in the orthogonal arrays and computing the
  signal-to-noise (SN) ratio based on the quality
  loss for each experimental combination.
• Revised Experimental design is used in this
  method to arrange the design parameters and noise
  factors in the orthogonal arrays and to compute
  the signal-to-noise (SN) ratio based on the
  quality loss for each experimental combination.

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• The relative importance of each response can be
  transformed into a fuzzy number through means of
  the establishment of a formal scale system that
  can be used to convert linguistic terms into
  their corresponding fuzzy numbers and to express
  the relative importance of each response by the
  linguistic term.
• Revised The relative importance of each
  response can be transformed into a fuzzy number
  through means of establishing a formal scale
  system that can convert linguistic terms into
  their corresponding fuzzy numbers and expressing
  the relative importance of each response by the
  linguistic term.

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• The Taguchi approach provides a combination of
  experimental design techniques with quality loss
  considerations and that the average quadratic
  loss is minimized.
• RevisedThe Taguchi combines experimental design
  techniques with quality loss considerations and
  minimizes the average quadratic loss.

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• The conventional approach happens to be
  cumbersome, complicated and wastes too much time.
  
• Revised The conventional approach happens to be
  cumbersome, complicated and time consuming.

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• The two-step procedure not only identifies those
  factors that significantly affect the
  signal-to-noise (SN) ratio, but also the levels
  that maximize SN are found.
• Revised The two-step procedure not only
  identifies those factors that significantly
  affect the signal-to-noise (SN) ratio, but also
  finds the levels that maximize SN.

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• Logethetis (1988) proved that strong
  non-linearities exist and the B technique was
  also recommended for use by him.
• Revised Logethetis (1988) proved that strong
  non-linearities exist and also recommended using
  the B technique.

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• This work not only proposes an effective
  procedure based on the rank transformation of
  responses and regression analysis, but also the
  singly censored data are discussed.
• Revised This work not only proposes an
  effective procedure based on the rank
  transformation of responses and regression
  analysis, but also discusses the singly censored
  data.

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• Conventional approaches offer an explanation of
  this phenomenon and providing alternative
  strategies to solve the problem.
• RevisedConventional approaches explain this
  phenomenon and provide alternative strategies to
  solve the problem.