Title: INTRODUCTION to COLORCODING
1INTRODUCTIONtoCOLOR-CODING
2Use your eyes to make sure you have your
paragraph in order!
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4Does that picture remind you of anything?
5It should remind you of an upside down traffic
light!
6We begin by using these three basic colors
We begin color coding using these three basic
colors
7Green means GO
8Green means GO
Write a topic sentence!
9Yellow means slow down!
10Give a REASON, DETAIL, or FACT.
Yellow means slow down!
11Yellow means slow down!
Introduce key concepts to support the topic
sentence.
12Red means STOP!
13Explain, give an example, or present evidence.
Red means STOP!
14Lets review!
15Green means GO
Whats the first thing you write?
16Write a topic sentence!
17Yellow means slow down
What is the next thing you should do?
18Give a reason, detail or fact. USE TRANSITION
WORDS!
19Red means stop
What are you supposed to do here?
20Explain yourself. Give an example. Present
evidence.
21If you answered all three of those correctly,
youre on the road to success!
22Write a topic sentence!
Give a reason, detail or fact.
Explain or give an example.
23When writing only ONE paragraph, you will also
need a concluding sentence.
24The conclusion will restate your topic sentence.
25Since its the same as our topic sentence, we
make this GREEN.
26Think of it as a stoplight. After you stop on
red, you go again on green!
27Before we begin working on our first outline,
there are a few more facts you need to know.
28Each paragraph will containEIGHT sentences!
29Each paragraph will contain
- one green (topic sentence)
30Each paragraph will contain
- one green (topic sentence)
- two yellows (reasons, details, facts)
31Each paragraph will contain
- one green (topic sentence)
- two yellows (reasons, details, facts)
- two reds for each yellow (explain)
32Each paragraph will contain
- one green (topic sentence)
- two yellows (reasons, details, facts)
- two reds for each yellow (explain)
- one green concluding sentence.
33Your color-coded outline will look like this
34Your color-coded outline will look like this
- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
35Your color-coded outline will look like this
- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
36Your color-coded outline will look like this
- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
37Your color-coded outline will look like this
- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
38Your color-coded outline will look like this
- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- II. Conclusion - Restate topic
39Now, its time for you to try on your papers!
40ASSIGNMENT
- Color code the sample outline in your handout.
41CHECK YOUR WORK!
42Your final outline should look like this
- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- II. Conclusion
43Lets try filling in the blank outline
44Where to begin?
45Gather Ideas!
46Topic
- Ways that cats protect themselves.
47The Brain Dump!
List EVERYTHING you can think of about the topic!
48The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
run fast
49The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
run fast
50The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
51The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
sharp nails
52The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
sharp nails
scratch
53The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
climb trees
sharp nails
scratch
54The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
climb trees
sharp nails
furry
scratch
55The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
sharp nails
furry
scratch
56The Brain Dump!
Topic is Cats Protection
Tomcats
bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
afraid of dogs
sharp nails
furry
scratch
57The Brain Dump!
This doesnt really help us organize our
thoughts, does it?
58Now, lets organize our thoughts,
- Eliminate those things that do not apply to the
topic.
59Now, lets organize our thoughts,
- Eliminate those things that do not apply to the
topic. - Find two ideas you can write about.
60Now, lets organize our thoughts,
- Eliminate those things that do not apply to the
topic. - Find two ideas you can write about.
- Organize your thoughts in an outline.
61The Brain Dump!
What can we eliminate?
We can definitely eliminate three.
Tomcats
bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
afraid of dogs
sharp nails
furry
scratch
62The Brain Dump!
Find 2 Reasons/Details/Facts
Tomcats
Can you see a way to divide the topic into two
categories?
bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
afraid of dogs
sharp nails
furry
scratch
63The Brain Dump!
These have something in common.
bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
sharp nails
scratch
64The Brain Dump!
These also have something in common.
bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
sharp nails
scratch
65How can I organize these things into an outline?
- What we need
- Two yellows
- Two reds under each yellow
66Lets revisit the things that had something in
common.
67bite
run fast
land on their feet
climb trees
sharp nails
scratch
68What do these things have in common?
69- These are both things that cats do to get away
from their enemy!
70- This can be our first yellow!
- DETAIL/FACT
71What do these things have in common?
72- These are all things cats do in a fight!
73- This can be our second yellow!
- DETAIL/FACT
74Lets organize our thoughts in a color-coded
outline!
- An outline doesnt use complete sentences. Only
words and phrases are used.
75Start with your topic!
76Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
77Now add your two yellows (reasons/details/facts)
78Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
79Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1.
- 2.
- B. Good fighters
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
80Now stop and explain and/or give examples.
These are the reds.
81Remember these ideas?
82Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1. Run fast
- 2.
- B. Good fighters
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
83Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1. Run fast
- 2. Climb trees
- B. Good fighters
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
84We can use different words than we originally
wrote.
85Remember these?
We can combine these into one.
86Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1. Run fast
- 2. Climb trees
- B. Good fighters
- 1. Scratch with sharp claws
- 2.
- II.
87Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1. Run fast
- 2. Climb trees
- B. Good fighters
- 1. Scratch with sharp claws
- 2. Bite with sharp teeth
- II.
88Now restate the topic.
- Do not just rewrite it. Use synonyms to say what
you mean in a different way.
89Original Topic
90Look for synonyms
91Look for synonyms
- protect
- save
- take care of
92Look for synonyms
- protect
- save
- take care of
- guard
93Look for synonyms
- protect
- save
- take care of
- guard
- defend
94Look for synonyms
- protect
- save
- take care of
- guard
- defend
- (add one of your own)
95Color-Coded Outline
- I. Cats protection
- A. Get away from enemies
- 1. Run fast
- 2. Climb trees
- B. Good fighters
- 1. Scratch with sharp claws
- 2. Bite with sharp teeth
- II. Take care of themselves
96ASSIGNMENT
- Color code the
- Cats
- outline in your handout.
97Part Two
- Creating complete sentences
98Make each line of your outline into a sentence in
order to create a completed paragraph.
99Outline to Paragraph
100Outline to Paragraph
- I. Cats protection
- Cats protect themselves in two ways.
101Outline to Paragraph
102Outline to Paragraph
- A. Get away from enemies
-
-
- First, they are able to get away quickly from
their enemies.
103Outline to Paragraph
104Outline to Paragraph
-
- 1. Run fast
-
- Cats are fast runners.
105Outline to Paragraph
106Outline to Paragraph
-
- 2. Climb trees
-
- They can climb trees, too.
107Outline to Paragraph
108Outline to Paragraph
- B. Good fighters
-
-
- Next, cats are good fighters.
109Outline to Paragraph
- 1. Scratch with sharp claws
-
-
110Outline to Paragraph
- 1. Scratch with sharp claws
-
- Cats sharp claws can inflict pain and
discourage attackers.
111Outline to Paragraph
112Outline to Paragraph
- 2. Bite with sharp teeth
-
- They can also use their pointed incisors to
bite their enemies.
113Outline to Paragraph
- II. Take care of themselves
-
114Outline to Paragraph
- II. Take care of themselves
-
- Cats take care of themselves.
115Our completed paragraph.
- Cats protect themselves in two ways. First,
they are able to get away quickly from their
enemies. Cats are fast runners. They can climb
trees, too. Next, cats are good fighters. Cats
sharp claws can inflict pain and discourage
attackers. They can also use their pointed
incisors to bite their enemies. Cats take care
of themselves.
116Take a moment now to color code the full
paragraph on your handout.
117Lets try one more outline.
118This time, well do it without the brain dump
119Color-Coded Outline
Remember the basic outline
120GO! Narrow your topic.
121Think about one or two words that can describe a
mom
122Color-Coded Outline
Mom is nice!
123Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
124SLOW DOWN! Reason Detail Fact
GIVE A
125Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
Now, think of a reason/detail/fact that makes
mom a nice person.
126Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
Now, think of a reason/detail/fact that makes
mom a nice person.
In other words, what makes mom a nice person?
127Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
128STOP! Explain Give an example Provide evidence
or
or
129Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
How does mom make you happy?
130Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1.
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
How does mom make you happy?
Think of things she does that make you happy.
131Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2.
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
132Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
133Back to yellow Reason Detail Fact
give another
134Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B.
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
How else is mom a nice person?
135Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
136STOP! Explain Give an example Provide evidence
or
or
137Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
How does mom help other people?
138Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. makes me cookies
- 2. picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
How does mom help others?
Think of things she does for other people.
139Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1. Takes Grandma to the dr.
- 2.
- II.
140Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1. Takes Grandma to the dr.
- 2. Helps at my school
- II.
141Back To Green Restate your topic
142Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1. Takes Grandma to the dr.
- 2. Helps at my school
- II.
What is another way to describe a nice mom?
143Color-Coded Outline
- I. Nice person
- A. Makes me happy.
- 1. Makes me cookies
- 2. Picks up after me
- B. Helps other people
- 1. Takes Grandma to the dr.
- 2. Helps at my school
- II. Mom is great
144ASSIGNMENT
- Color code the Mom outline in your handout.
145You can fill in your outline in any order you
want to!
- You can do your reasons/details/facts, then go
back to your examples.
146- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1.
- 2.
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
147- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1.
- 2.
- II.
148- I. Topic Sentence
- A. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- B. Reason/Detail/Fact
- 1. Explain/Example
- 2. Explain/Example
- II.
149Now its your turn to try!
150ASSIGNMENT
Write a color coded outline for each of the
following categories
- Persuasive paragraph
- Descriptive/personal narrative paragraph