Daily Oral Language

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Daily Oral Language

• Review Daily
• You need to be able to explain why a word is
  changed in every sentence.

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Day 1 - Daily Oral Language

• a. hers was the most clearest essay of all.
• b. which of the two actors were best for
  the role

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Day 1 Correct Answers

• a. hers was the most clearest essay of all.
• Hers was the clearest essay of all.
• b. which of the two actors were best for
  the role
• Which of the two actors was better for
  the role?

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Day 2 - Daily Oral Language

• a. john F. Kennedy ask robert Frost a popular
  poet to participate in the presidential
  inauguration ceramony
• b. in a poem that rimes the repeated sounds
  ofen occurs at the ends of the lines

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Day 2 - Correct Answers

• a. john F. Kennedy ask robert Frost a popular
  poet to participate in the presidential
  inauguration ceramony
• John F. Kennedy asked Robert Frost, a popular
  poet, to participate in the presidential
  inauguration ceremony.
• b. in a poem that rimes the repeated sounds
  ofen occurs at the ends of the lines
• In a poem that rhymes, the repeated sounds
  often occur at the ends of the lines.

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Day 3 - Daily Oral Language

• 3. a. please anser the door marguerite her
• Granmother requested
• b. do you think wondered Mrs Flowers that
• marguerite would speak if i asked her
  to
• read out loud

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Day 3 - Correct Answers

• 3. a. please anser the door marguerite her
• Granmother requested
• Please answer the door, Marguerite, her
• grandmother requested.
• b. do you think wondered Mrs Flowers that
• marguerite would speak if i asked her
  to
• read out loud
• Do you think, wondered Mrs. Flowers, that
  
• Marguerite would speak if I asked her to
  
• read out loud?

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Day 4 - Daily Oral Language

• a. its wonderfull to feel liked and appreciated
  by someone whose importent to you
• b. im sure that maya angelou
  autobiographical story is about a young girl
  whos name is marguerite

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Day 4 - Correct Answers

• a. its wonderfull to feel liked and appreciated
  by someone whose importent to you
• Its wonderful to feel liked and appreciated
  by
• someone whos important to you.
• b. im sure that maya angelous
  autobigraphical story is about a young girl whos
  name is marguerite
• Im sure that Maya Angelous
  autobiographical story is about a young girl
  whose name is Marguerite.

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Day 5 - Daily Oral Language

• a. alfonso would of use his own bike if its
  chane hadnt broke
• b. because alfonsos brother had lent him a
  bike alfonso gone on his date afterall

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Day 5 - Answers

• a. alfonso would of use his own bike if its
  chane hadnt broke
• Alfonso would have used his own bike if
  its chain hadnt broken.
• b. because alfonsos brother had lent him a bike
  alfonso gone on his date afterall
• Because Alfonsos brother had lent him
  a bike, Alfonso went on his first date after all.

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Day 6 - Daily Oral Language

• a. toni cade Bambara trys to make her
• characters realistick
• b. many writers base thier storys on things
  that happenn to them in real live

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Day 6 - Answers

• a. toni cade Bambara trys to make her
• characters realistick
• Toni Cade Bambara tries to make her
• characters realistic.
• b. many writers base thier storys on things
  
• that happenn to them in real live
• Many writers base their stories on
  things
• that happen to them in real life.

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Day 7 - Daily Oral Language

• a. no Charlie didnt know nothing about those
• psychologicle test
• b. as charlies wellth increased he learn
  some
• hard lesson about people

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Day 7 - Answers

• a. no Charlie didnt know nothing about those
• psychologicle test
• No, Charlie didnt know anything about
• those psycological tests.
• b. as charlies wellth increased he learn
  some
• hard lesson about people
• As Charlies wealth increased, he
  learned some hard lessons about people.

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Day 8 - Daily Oral Language

• a. do you think gary new that his friends was
• laffing at him our english teacher
  inquiried
• b. the factry workers werent awear of
  pauls
• opperation

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Day 8 - Answers

• a. do you think gary new that his friends was
• laffing at him our english teacher
  inquiried
• Do you think Gary knew that his friends
• were laughing at him? our English teacher
  inquired.
• b. the factry workers werent awear of
  pauls
• operation
• The factory workers werent aware of
  Pauls operation.

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Day 9 - Daily Oral Language

• a. them shoes dont fit him but he wears them
• any way
• b. charlie finish the long complicated book
• all by hisself

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Day 9 - Answers

• a. them shoes dont fit him but he wears them
• any way
• Those shoes dont fit him, but he
  wears
• them anyway.
• b. charlie finish the long complicated book
• all by hisself
• Charlie finished the long, complicated
• book all by himself.

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Day 10 - Answers

• 10 a. him dont go nowhere without his sister
• b. susan never do nothing her dont want to
• do

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Day 10 - Daily Oral Language

• 10 a. him dont go nowhere without his sister
• He doesnt go anywhere without his
• sister.
• b. susan never do nothing her dont want to
• do
• Susan never does anything she doesnt
• want to do.

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Day 11 - Daily Oral Language

• a. greg heared somebody or something moving
  inside of the abandonned building
• b. him and lemon brown hided from the thugs

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Day 11 - Answers

• a. greg heared somebody or something moving
  inside of the abandonned building
• Greg heard somebody or something moving
  inside the abandoned building.
• b. him and lemon brown hided from the
  thugs
• He and Lemon Brown hid from the thugs.

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Day 12 - Daily Oral Language

• 12 a. its true that math wasnt one of his
  favorite
• subject
• b. lightening litted up the new york nite

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Day 12 - Answers

• 12 a. its true that math wasnt one of his
  favorite
• subject
• Its true that math wasnt one of his
  favorite
• subjects.
• b. lightening litted up the new york nite
• Lightning lit up the New York night.

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Day 13 - Daily Oral Language

• 13 a. walter dean myers who writes novels and
• short stories believes that television
  isnt
• a good influence on kids
• b. nobody wouldnt want to steel his old
• newspaper articals melissa said

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Day 13 - Answers

• 13 a. walter dean myers who writes novels and
• short stories believes that television
  isnt
• a good influence on kids
• Walter Dean Myers, who writes novels
  and short stories, believes that television isnt
• a good influence on kids.
• b. nobody wouldnt want to steel his old
• newspaper articals melissa said
• Nobody would want to steal his old
• newspaper articles, Melissa said.

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Day 14 - Daily Oral Language

• 14 a. our guide lead my sister and i to the town
• where edna st vincent millay is born
• b. leroy V quintanas grandfather possessed
• wisdom a quality that cant be
  teached
• in college

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Day 14 - Answers

• 14 a. our guide lead my sister and i to the town
• where edna st vincent millay is born
• Our guide led my sister and me to the
  town where Edna St. Vincent Millay was born.
• b. leroy V quintanas grandfather possessed
• wisdom a quality that cant be
  teached
• in college
• Leroy V. Quintanas grandfather
  possessed wisdom, a quality that cant be taught
  in
• college.

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Day 15 - Daily Oral Language

• 15 a. can courage be past from one generation
• to another
• b. millay beleives that material treasures
  are
• worth alot less then youd think

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Day 15 - Answers

• 15 a. can courage be past from one generation
• to another
• Can courage be passed from one
  generation to another?
• b. millay beleives that material treasures
  are
• worth alot less then youd think
• Millay believes that material
  treasures are worth a lot less than youd think.

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Day 16 - Daily Oral Language

• a. niether english or spanish are hard if its
• your native tonge
• b. every language have their own rithim

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Day 16 - Answers

• a. niether english or spanish are hard if its
• your native tonge
• Neither English nor Spanish is hard if
  its your native tongue.
• b. every language have their own rithim
• Every language has its own rhythm.

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Day 17 - Daily Oral Language

• a. there wasnt nothing boring about the
• tails grandpa told
• b. the childrens sioux Great-Grandpa feel
  that theres a rite time for everything

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Day 17 - Answers

• a. there wasnt nothing boring about the
• tails grandpa told
• There wasnt anything boring about
  the
• tales Grandpa told.
• b. the childrens sioux Great-Grandpa feel
  that theres a rite time for everything
• The childrens Sioux great-grandpa
  feels that theres a right time for everything.

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Day 18 - Daily Oral Language

• a. the sacred medicine bag had belonged to
• Joes father so it must of ben quiet
  old
• b. take grandma back here from taiwan
• her mother said

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Day 18 - Answers

• a. the sacred medicine bag had belonged to
• Joes father so it must of ben quiet
  old
• The sacred medicine bag had belonged to
• Joes father, so it must have been
  quite old.
• b. take grandma back here from taiwan
• her mother said
• Bring Grandma back here from Taiwan,
• her mother said.

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Day 19 - Daily Oral Language

• 19. a. he growed a moustache to make hisself
• look older and he succeded too good
• b. that visit wasnt the bestest time mike
  
• had ever had

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Day 19 - Answers

• 19. a. he growed a moustache to make hisself
• look older and he succeded too good
• He grew a moustache to make himself
  look older, and he succeeded too well.
• b. that visit wasnt the bestest time mike
  
• had ever had
• That visit wasnt the best time Mike
  had
• ever had.

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Day 20 - Daily Oral Language

• 20. a. was mike right in excepting his
• Grandmothers apology
• b. wheres the story set at

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Day 20 - Answers

• 20. a. was mike right in excepting his
• Grandmothers apology
• Was Mike right in accepting his
• grandmothers apology?
• b. wheres the story set at
• Wheres the story set?

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Day 21 - Daily Oral Language

• 21. a. dave had went to the City of Bath from
• london
• b. he reconized the names of old freinds

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Day 21 - Answers

• 21. a. dave had went to the City of Bath from
• london
• Dave had gone to the city of Bath from
  
• London.
• b. he reconized the names of old freinds
• He recognized the names of old
  friends.

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Day 22 - Daily Oral Language

• 22. a. 17 isnt to young an age too get a job
• b. he piered threw the window of the
• resterant

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Day 22 - Answers

• 22. a. 17 isnt to young an age too get a job
• Seventeen isnt too young an age to get
• a job.
• b. he piered threw the window of the
• resterant
• He peered through the window of the
• restaurant.

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Day 23 - Daily Oral Language

• 23. a. hair combing being a gift woman in her
• family given each other

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Day 23 - Answers

• 23. a. hair combing being a gift woman in her
• family given each other
• Hair combing is a gift women in her
• family give each other.

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Day 24 - Daily Oral Language

• 24. a. dreadful nervous, the narrater in the
• Tell-Tale heart heard sounds that
• others couldnt hear
• b. he moved slow and cautious into that
• there room

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Day 24 Answers

• 24. a. dreadful nervous, the narrater in the
• Tell-Tale heart heard sounds that
• others couldnt hear
• Dreadfully nervous, the narrator in
• The Tell-Tale Heart heard sounds
  
• that others couldnt hear.
• b. he moved slow and cautious into that
• there room
• He moved slowly and cautiously into
• that room.

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Day 25 - Daily Oral Language

• 25. a. edgar allan poe the famous poet and
• short-story writer was not payed good
• for his work
• b. the suspensefull plot builded to a
• sattisfying climax

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Day 25 - Answers

• 25. a. edgar allan poe the famous poet and
• short-story writer was not payed good
• for his work
• Edgar Allan Poe, the famous poet and
  
• short-story writer, was not paid
  well
• for his work.
• b. the suspensefull plot builded to a
• sattisfying climax
• The suspenseful plot built to a
• satisfying climax.

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Day 26 - Daily Oral Language

• 26. a. do ray bradburys story make a statement
• onto todays society
• b. sceince fiction writers offen set
  storys on
• the future and in other planets

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Day 26 - Daily Oral Language

• 26. a. do ray bradburys story make a statement
• onto todays society
• Does Ray Bradburys story make a
• statement about todays society?
• b. sceince fiction writers offen set
  storys on the future and in other planets
• Science fiction writers often set
  stories
• in the future and on other planets.

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Day 27 - Daily Oral Language

• 27. a. an inner story is when another story is
  told
• by a character within the main story
• b. zenta was the oldest of the two
• disemployed workers!

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Day 27 - Daily Oral Language

• 27. a. an inner story is when another story is
  told
• by a character within the main story
• An inner story is another story told
• by a character within the main story.
• b. zenta was the oldest of the two
• disemployed workers!
• Zenta was the older of the two
• unemployed workers.

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Day 28 - Daily Oral Language

• 28.
• was you disappointed that him and the Samurai
  Warrior wasnt actully asleep for fifety years
• b. him and his boss was angry yet releived

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Day 28 - Daily Oral Language

• 28.
• was you disappointed that him and the Samurai
  Warrior wasnt actully asleep for fifety years
• Were you disappointed that he and the
  samurai warrior werent actually asleep for fifty
  years?
• b. him and his boss was angry yet releived
• He and his boss were angry yet relieved.

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Day 29 - Daily Oral Language

• 29.
• in the 16th Century in japan wealthy people often
  hire freelance warriors to protect themselves
• b. while Framton Nuttel waited, vera gave him a
• compleat history of her family

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Day 29 - Daily Oral Language

• 29.
• in the 16th Century in japan wealthy people often
• hire freelance warriors to protect
  themselves
• In the sixteenth century in Japan, wealthy
  people often hired freelance warriors to protect
  them.
• while Framton Nuttel waited, vera gave him a
• compleat history of her family
• While Framton Nuttel waited, Vera gave him
  a complete history of her family.

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Day 30 - Daily Oral Language

• 30.
• the antidotes harold tells show that he has a
• goodly sense of humor
• even though his humor is good he gets anoyed
• by peoples insensitivity

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Day 30 - Daily Oral Language

• 30.
• the antidotes harold tells show that he has a
• goodly sense of humor
• The anecdotes Harold tells show that he has
  
• a good sense of humor.
• even though his humor is good he gets anoyed
• by peoples insensitivity
• Even though his sense of humor is good, he
• is annoyed by peoples insensitivity.

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Day 31 - Daily Oral Language

• 31.
• a. no doctor couldnt save the rich mans eyes
• sight
• the old peddlars wife and children wasnt happy
  when he went away

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Day 31 - Daily Oral Language

• 31.
• a. no doctor couldnt save the rich mans eyes
• sight
• No doctor could save the rich mans
  eyesight.
• the old peddlars wife and children wasnt happy
• when he went away
• The old peddlers wife and children werent
  
• happy when he went away.

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Day 32 - Daily Oral Language

• 32.
• a. did the water level raise the teacher ask

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Day 32 - Daily Oral Language

• 32.
• a. did the water level raise the teacher ask
• Did the water level rise? the teacher
  asked.

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Day 33 - Daily Oral Language

• 33.
• a. since we share this environment you and me
• must work together
• like the peddler in the folk tale, gary paulsen
• learnt wisdom from animals

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Day 33 - Daily Oral Language

• 33.
• a. since we share this environment you and me
• must work together
• Since we share this environment, you and I
• must work together.
• like the peddler in the folk tale, gary paulsen
• learnt wisdom from animals
• Like the peddler in the folk tale, Gary
• Paulsen learned wisdom from animals.

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Day 34 - Daily Oral Language

• 34.
• a. his dogs was too tirred too run
• b. the water in the cup had froze

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Day 34 - Daily Oral Language

• 34.
• a. his dogs was too tirred too run
• His dogs were too tired to run.
• the water in the cup had froze
• The water in the cup had frozen.

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Day 35 - Daily Oral Language

• 35.
• yesterday birdfoots grandfather stopped his car
  and saves much frogs lives
• b. along time ago my Father braked his leg

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Day 35 - Daily Oral Language

• 35.
• a. yesterday birdfoots grandfather stopped his
  car
• and saves much frogs lives
• Yesterday Birdfoots grandfather stopped his
  car and saved many frogs lives.
• along time ago my Father braked his leg
• A long time ago my father broke his leg.

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Day 36 - Daily Oral Language

• 36.
• a. the Iditarod are a famous dog-sled race at
  Alaska
• b. wheres them dogs at

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Day 36 - Daily Oral Language

• 36.
• a. the Iditarod are a famous dog-sled race at
  Alaska
• The Iditarod is a famous dog-sled race in
  Alaska.
• wheres them dogs at
• Where are those dogs?

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Day 37 - Daily Oral Language

• 37.
• a. dolphins is not fish they are mammals
• b. are dolphins more smarter then chimpanzees

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Day 37 - Daily Oral Language

• 37.
• a. dolphins is not fish they are mammals
• Dolphins are not fish they are mammals.
• are dolphins more smarter then chimpanzees
• Are dolphins smarter than chimpanzees?

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Day 38 - Daily Oral Language

• 38.
• if you were a dolphin would you talked to human
  beins
• b. anyone which is a vegetarian dont eat meat

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Day 38 - Daily Oral Language

• 38.
• if you were a dolphin would you talked to human
  beins
• If you were a dolphin, would you talk to
  human beings?
• anyone which is a vegetarian dont eat meat
• Anyone who is a vegetarian doesnt eat meat.

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Day 39 - Daily Oral Language

• 39.
• theres many books magazines newspapers and
  computers in youre school libery
• on weekdays during the school year us students
  wake up early

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Day 39 - Daily Oral Language

• 39.
• a. theres many books magazines newspapers and
• computers in youre school libery
• There are many books, magazines, newspapers,
  and computers in your school library.
• on weekdays during the school year us students
  wake up early
• On weekdays during the school year, we
  students wake up early.

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Day 40 - Daily Oral Language

• 40.
• a. jamal forgetted his pencils again so he
  loaned
• some from rita and i
• a poet from Laguna Pueblo teachs Writing at
• the university of New Mexico

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Day 40 - Daily Oral Language

• 40.
• a. jamal forgetted his pencils again so he
  loaned
• some from rita and i
• Jamal forgot his pencils again, so he
  borrowed some from Rita and me.
• a poet from Laguna Pueblo teachs Writing at
• the university of New Mexico
• A poet from Laguna Pueblo teaches writing
  at the University of New Mexico.

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Day 41 - Daily Oral Language

• 41.
• a. whose that pets owner
• b. whose pet is inside of mr hart room

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Day 41 - Daily Oral Language

• 41.
• a. whose that pets owner
• Whos that pets owner?
• whose pet is inside of mr hart room
• Whose pet is in Mr. Harts room?

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Day 42 - Daily Oral Language

• 42.
• we are not fighting shouted mr ODaniel we are
  having a discussion
• b. we have potatoes for diner tonite mary
• announced cheerful

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Day 42 - Daily Oral Language

• 42.
• a. we are not fighting shouted mr ODaniel we
  are
• having a discussion
• We are not fighting! shouted Mr. ODaniel.
  We are having a discussion.
• we have potatos for diner tonite mary
• announced cheerful
• We have potatoes for dinner tonight,
• Mary announced cheerfully.

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Day 43 - Daily Oral Language

• 43.
• a. the family eat at 630 PM
• daniel who turn sixteen in june is a only child

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Day 43 - Daily Oral Language

• 43.
• a. the family eat at 630 PM
• The family eats at 630 P.M.
• daniel who turn sixteen in june is a only child
• Daniel, who turns sixteen in June, is an
  only child.

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Day 44 - Daily Oral Language

• 44.
• a. her and her mother doesnt understand each
• other good
• does most people hide thier diarys
• somewheres

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Day 44 - Daily Oral Language

• 44.
• a. her and her mother doesnt understand each
• other good
• She and her mother dont understand each
• other well.
• does most people hide their diarys
• somewheres
• Do most people hide their diaries somewhere?

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Day 45 - Daily Oral Language

• 45.
• a. sit down please mr franklin said quieter
• mrs franklin divides theyre portions fair

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Day 45 - Daily Oral Language

• 45.
• a. sit down please mr franklin said quieter
• Sit down, please, Mr. Franklin said
  quietly.
• mrs franklin divides theyre portions fair
• Mrs. Franklin divides their portions fairly.

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Day 46 - Daily Oral Language

• 46.
• a. the book with the stripe cover is hers
• peter put hisself in his fathers position and
• feeled embarassed for he

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Day 46 - Daily Oral Language

• 46.
• a. the book with the stripe cover is hers
• The book with the striped cover is hers.
• peter put hisself in his fathers position and
• feeled embarassed for he
• Peter put himself in his fathers position
  and
• felt embarrassed for him.

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Day 47 - Daily Oral Language

• 47.
• during world war 2 the nazis orderred all jewish
  people to sow yellow Stars of David on theyre
  cloths
• Hanukkah a festive jewish holliday lasts eigt
• days

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Day 47 - Daily Oral Language

• 47.
• during world war 2 the nazis orderred all jewish
  people to sow yellow Stars of David on theyre
  cloths
• During World War II the Nazis ordered all
  Jewish people to sew yellow Stars of David on
  their clothes.
• Hanukkah a festive jewish holliday lasts eigt
• days
• Hanukkah, a festive Jewish holiday, lasts
  eight days.

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Day 48 - Daily Oral Language

• 48.
• a. that coat must of costed a fortune
• mr kraler and gary they works downstairs

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Day 48 - Daily Oral Language

• 48.
• a. that coat must of costed a fortune
• That coat must have cost a fortune.
• mr kraler and gary they works downstairs
• Mr. Kraler and Gary work downstairs.

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Day 49 - Daily Oral Language

• 49.
• a. the play the diary of anne frank opened on
• broadway in 1955 just a deccade after its
• real-life herone dies

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Day 49 - Daily Oral Language

• 49.
• a. the play the diary of anne frank opened on
• broadway in 1955 just a deccade after its
• real-life herone dies
• The play The Diary of Anne Frank opened on
  Broadway in 1955 just a decade after its
• real-life heroine died.

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Day 50 - Daily Oral Language

• 50.
• i heard where a reporter interviewed naomis
• grandmother which is a survivor of the
• holocaust in europe
• she pored tea for her visitor, but didnt offer
• him no cake

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Day 50 - Daily Oral Language

• 50.
• i heard where a reporter interviewed naomis
• grandmother which is a survivor of the
• holocaust in europe
• I heard that a reporter interviewed Naomis
• grandmother, who is a survivor of the
• Holocuast in Europe.
• she pored tea for her visitor, but didnt offer
• him no cake
• She poured tea for her visitor but didnt
  offer him any cake.

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Day 51 - Daily Oral Language

• 51.
• juan saw a scary monster that was fourty four
• foot tall
• b. at what heighth do you want them bookshelfs

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Day 51 - Daily Oral Language

• 51.
• juan saw a scary monster that was fourty four
• foot tall
• Juan saw a scary monster that was
  forty-four feet tall.
• at what heighth do you want them bookshelfs
• At what height do you want those
  bookshelves?

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Day 52 - Daily Oral Language

• 52.
• marisas only sister jasmine is as cureous as a
• Cat
• b. what a relief! jackie exlamed

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Day 52 - Daily Oral Language

• 52.
• marisas only sister jasmine is as cureous as a
• Cat
• Marisas only sister, Jasmine, is as
  curious as a cat.
• what a relief! jackie exlamed
• What a relief! Jackie exclaimed.

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Day 53 - Daily Oral Language

• 53.
• ms jackson stared at leslies messy desk in
• unbelief
• of all the students in the eigth grade, she
  said,
• david is the less noisier

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Day 53 - Daily Oral Language

• 53.
• ms jackson stared at leslies messy desk in
• unbelief
• Ms. Jackson stared at Leslies messy desk
  in disbelief.
• of all the students in the eigth grade, she
  said,
• david is the less noisier
• Of all the students in the eighth grade,
  she said, David is the least noisy.

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Day 54 - Daily Oral Language

• 54.
• everyone know that ebenezer dorset is the most
• wealthiest most stingiest and most meanest
  person
• in town
• its coldest in the artic than the tropics

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Day 54 - Daily Oral Language

• 54.
• everyone know that ebenezer dorset is the most
• wealthiest most stingiest and most meanest
  person
• in town
• Everyone knows that Ebenezer Dorset is the
  
• wealthiest, stingiest, and meanest person
• in town.
• its coldest in the artic than the tropics
• Its colder in the Arctic than in the
  tropics.

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Day 55 - Daily Oral Language

• 55.
• in a period of only 10 minutes bill and joe
  finish the
• inventory last night
• the criminals stealed 2 million but were catched
  
• immedately

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Day 55 - Daily Oral Language

• 55.
• in a period of only 10 minutes bill and joe
  finish the
• inventory last night
• In a period of only ten minutes, Bill and
  Joe finished the inventory last night.
• the criminals stealed 2 million but were catched
  
• immedately
• The criminals stole two million dollars
  but were caught immediately.

112
Day 56 - Daily Oral Language

• 56.
• her and julius lester the writer was born in
  missouri
• b. you and me dont hardly have enough time to
  finish
• her job

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Day 56 - Daily Oral Language

• 56.
• her and julius lester the writer was born in
  missouri
• She and Julius Lester, the writer, were
  born in Missouri.
• you and me dont hardly have enough time to
  finish
• her job
• You and I dont have enough time to finish
  the job.

114
Day 57 - Daily Oral Language

• 57.
• rhythm isnt the same as ryme veronica
• b. mitchell can you give the class an example of
  a ryme
• sceme

115
Day 57 - Daily Oral Language

• 57.
• rhythm isnt the same as ryme veronica
• Rhythm isnt the same as rhyme, Veronica.
• mitchell can you give the class an example of a
  ryme
• sceme
• Mitchell, can you give the class an
  example of a rhyme scheme?

116
Day 58 - Daily Oral Language

• 58.
• in those boxs is crazy qilts and other specail
  things
• b. bread butter and milk is all i need

117
Day 58 - Daily Oral Language

• 58.
• in those boxs is crazy qilts and other specail
  things
• In those boxes are crazy quilts and other
  special things.
• bread butter and milk is all i need
• Bread, butter, and milk are all I need.

118
Day 59 - Daily Oral Language

• 59.
• at the public libery where she formerly work,
  jackie
• torrence enertained children by telling
  storys
• her bestest frend talked her into bying that
  peace of
• jewlry for twenty-five dollar

119
Day 59 - Daily Oral Language

• 59.
• at the public libery where she formerly work,
  jackie
• torrence enertained children by telling
  storys
• At the public library where she formerly
  worked, Jackie Torrence entertained children by
  telling stories.
• her bestest frend talked her into bying that
  peace of
• jewlry for twenty-five dollar
• Her best friend talked her into buying that
  piece of
• jewelry for twenty-five dollars.
• Do academic log if done early!!!

120
Day 60 - Daily Oral Language

• 60.
• johnny a boy with freckels and red hair lives at
• alabama
• somebody should learn charles some manners mrs
• yee said at her neibor

121
Day 60 - Daily Oral Language

• 60.
• johnny a boy with freckels and red hair lives at
• alabama
• Johnny, a boy with freckles and red hair,
  lives in
• Alabama.
• somebody should learn charles some manners mrs
• yee said at her neibor
• Somebody should teach Charles some
  manners, Mrs. Yee said to her neighbor.

122
Day 61 - Daily Oral Language

• 61.
• a well-nown orater, daniel webster had gave many
• rememberable speechs
• altho he had spoke eloquent, nobody believed he
• would beat his oponent

123
Day 61 - Daily Oral Language

• 61.
• a well-nown orater, daniel webster had gave many
• rememberable speechs
• A well-known orator, Daniel Webster gave
  many
• memorable speeches.
• altho he had spoke eloquent, nobody believed he
• would beat his oponent
• Although he had spoken eloquently, nobody
  believed he would beat his opponent.

124
Day 62 - Daily Oral Language

• 62.
• i just want to go back the womans brother
  protested
• b. to many people had risked them lives for her

125
Day 62 - Daily Oral Language

• 62.
• i just want to go back the womans brother
  protested
• I just want to go back, the womans
  brother protested.
• to many people had risked them lives for her
• Too many people had risked their lives for
  her.

126
Day 63 - Daily Oral Language

• 63.
• the Man Who Shot Liberty Valance a story by
  dorothy
• m johnson was made into a popular film
• the group sleeped during the day and travel at
  nite

127
Day 63 - Daily Oral Language

• 63.
• the Man Who Shot Liberty Valance a story by
  dorothy
• m johnson was made into a popular film
• The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance, a
  story by Dorothy M. Johnson, was made into a
  popular film.
• the group sleeped during the day and travel at
  nite
• The group slept during the day and
  traveled at night.

128
Day 64 - Daily Oral Language

• 64.
• here is an apple and some peachs for your journy
• the jury of 12 villans in that story were
  frightning to
• many readers

129
Day 64 - Daily Oral Language

• 64.
• here is an apple and some peachs for your journy
• Here are an apple and some peaches for your
  journey.
• the jury of 12 villans in that story were
  frightning to
• many readers
• The jury of twelve villains in that story
  was frightening to many readers.

130
Day 65 - Daily Oral Language

• 65.
• like many of henry wadsworth longfellows poems
  Paul Reveres Ride was inspired by real people and
  events
• b. weather found in greeting cards songs or
  poems rhythm comes from the paterning of elements

131
Day 65 - Daily Oral Language

• 65.
• like many of henry wadsworth longfellows poems
  Paul Reveres Ride was inspired by real people and
  events
• Like many of Henry Wadsworth Longfellows
  poems, Paul Reveres Ride was inpired by real
  people and events.
• weather found in greeting cards songs or poems
  rhythm comes from the paterning of elements
• Whether found in greeting cards, songs, or
  poems, rhythm
• comes from the patterning of elements.

132
Day 66 - Daily Oral Language

• 66.
• if all sentences are the same lenth the affect
  can be
• monotanis and boring
• the hungary sparrows chirrped because there
  wasnt
• no food left

133
Day 66 - Daily Oral Language

• 66.
• if all sentences are the same lenth the affect
  can be
• monotanis and boring
• If all sentences are the same length, the
  effect can be monotonous and boring.
• the hungary sparrows chirrped because there
  wasnt
• no food left
• The hungry sparrows chirped because there
  was
• no food left.

134
Day 67 - Daily Oral Language

• 67.
• free verse is a type of poetry that dont ryme
• mary and me was worryed that the mushroom would
• be poisinous

135
Day 67 - Daily Oral Language

• 67.
• free verse is a type of poetry that dont ryme
• Free verse is a type of poetry that doesnt
  rhyme.
• mary and me was worryed that the mushroom would
• be poisinous
• Mary and I worried that the mushroom would
  
• be poisonous.

136
Day 68 - Daily Oral Language

• 68.
• leroys argument was gooder than jakes
• b. not one of the lawyers appeals were sucessful

137
Day 68 - Daily Oral Language

• 68.
• leroys argument was gooder than jakes
• Leroys argument was better than Jakes.
• not one of the lawyers appeals were sucessful
• Not one of the lawyers appeals was
  successful.

138
Day 69 - Daily Oral Language

• 69.
• how is toby and sarah going to excape
• b. cerial are there favorate breakfuss food

139
Day 69 - Daily Oral Language

• 69.
• how is toby and sarah going to excape
• How are Toby and Sarah going to escape?
• cerial are there favorate breakfuss food
• Cereal is their favorite breakfast food.

140
Day 70 - Daily Oral Language

• 70.
• gregory the grate and his assistent will perform
  a majic show at the comunnity center on satursday
• fans who saw Casey at bat was probably
  disapointed by their hero

141
Day 70 - Daily Oral Language

• 70.
• gregory the grate and his assistent will perform
  a majic show at the comunnity center satursday
• Gregory the Great and his assistant will
  perform a magic show at the community center on
  Saturday.
• fans who saw Casey at bat was probably
  disapointed by their hero
• Fans who saw Casey at bat were probably
  disappointed by their hero.

142
Day 71 - Daily Oral Language

• 71.
• president lincoln gave a speech in gettysburg PA
  on
• Nov. 19 1863
• the emancipation proclaimation lead to the
  adopting
• of the 13th amendment, which outlawed
  slavery

143
Day 71 - Daily Oral Language

• 71.
• president lincoln gave a speech in gettysburg PA
  on
• Nov. 19 1863
• President Lincoln gave a speech in
  Gettysburg,
• Pennsylvania, on November 19, 1863.
• the emancipation proclaimation lead to the
  adopting
• of the 13th amendment, which outlawed
  slavery
• The Emancipation Proclamation led to the
  adoption of the Thirteenth Amendment, which
  outlawed slavery.

144
Day 72 - Daily Oral Language

• 72.
• 87 is another way of saying fore score and seven
• part of the battelfield became a cematary

145
Day 72 - Daily Oral Language

• 72.
• 87 is another way of saying fore score and seven
• Eighty-seven is another way of saying four
  score and seven.
• part of the battelfield became a cematary
• Part of the battlefield became a cemetery.

146
Day 73 - Daily Oral Language

• 73.
• dr. martin luther king jr was assasinated abraham
  
• lincoln was killed also
• its easier to use many words then being brief and
  too
• the point

147
Day 73 - Daily Oral Language

• 73.
• dr. martin luther king jr was assasinated abraham
  
• lincoln was killed also
• Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr., was
  assassinated Abraham Lincoln was killed also.
• its easier to use many words then being brief and
  too
• the point
• Its easier to use many words than to be
  brief and to the point.

148
Day 74 - Daily Oral Language

• 74.
• maria speak spanish and english however her
  brother knows three languages english spanish and
  french
• neither are ready

149
Day 74 - Daily Oral Language

• 74.
• maria speak spanish and english however her
  brother
• knows three languages english spanish and
  french
• Maria speaks Spanish and English however,
  her brother knows three languagues English,
  Spanish, and French.
• neither are ready
• Neither is ready.

150
Day 75 - Daily Oral Language

• 75.
• him and roberto was sharing a room for the summer
• b. each of the children read the book a woman
  called
• moses

151
Day 75 - Daily Oral Language

• 75.
• him and roberto was sharing a room for the summer
• He and Roberto were sharing a room for the
  summer.
• each of the children read the book a woman called
• moses
• Each of the children read the book A Woman
  Called Moses.

152
Day 76 - Daily Oral Language

• 76.
• will there be enuff beans and rice for everbody
  asked
• Ms Moore
• i spended a hundred dollar for this here giutar
• daniel said

153
Day 76 - Daily Oral Language

• 76.
• will there be enuff beans and rice for everbody
  asked
• Ms Moore
• Will there be enough beans and rice for
  everybody? asked Ms. Moore.
• i spended a hundred dollar for this here giutar
• daniel said
• I spent a hundred dollars for this
  guitar,
• Daniel said.

154
Day 77 - Daily Oral Language

• 77.
• pat who was rased on a sioux reservation studys
• american indian foke art
• whom creates stereotypes

155
Day 77 - Daily Oral Language

• 77.
• pat who was rased on a sioux reservation studys
• american indian foke art
• Pat, who was raised on a Sioux
  reservation, studies American Indian folk art.
• whom creates stereotypes
• Who creates stereotypes?

156
Day 78 - Daily Oral Language

• 78.
• there apartement consisted of one long bleak
  room
• with a single window
• with jeffrey and tommy monica have started a
• magizine

157
Day 78 - Daily Oral Language

• 78.
• there apartement consisted of one long bleak
  room
• with a single window
• Their apartment consisted of one long,
  bleak room
• with a single window.
• with jeffrey and tommy monica have started a
• magizine
• With Jeffrey and Tommy, Monica has started
  a
• magazine.

158
Day 79 - Daily Oral Language

• 79.
• josephine told diane i was so inspired by the
  haiku
• we read in class that i went home and write
  one of my own
• i wrote a long journal entry about the trees in
  blossom
• she went on then i cross out words until
  the words
• i have left over made a haiku

159
Day 79 - Daily Oral Language

• 79. Note. (change b. sentence to two sentences)
• josephine told diane i was so inspired by the
  haiku
• we read in class that i went home and write
  one of my own
• Josephine told Diane, I was so inspired
  by the haiku
• we read in class that I went home and
  wrote one of my own.
• i wrote a long journal entry about the trees in
  blossom
• she went on then i cross out words until
  the words
• i have left over made a haiku
• I wrote a long journal entry about the
  trees in blossom,
• she went on. Then I crossed out words
  until the words
• I had left over made a haiku.

160
Day 80 - Daily Oral Language

• 80.
• harry and him picked grapes in the hot sun all
  week
• long
• His mussels was so sore that he couldnt hardly
  move

161
Day 80 - Daily Oral Language

• 80.
• harry and him picked grapes in the hot sun all
  week
• long
• Harry and he picked grapes in the hot sun
  all week
• long.
• His mussels was so sore that he couldnt hardly
  move
• His muscles were so sore that he could
  hardly move.

162
Day 81 - Daily Oral Language

• 81.
• be still while I braide your hair Mathilda said
  her
• granmother
• heres the brush but wheres the comb at

163
Day 81 - Daily Oral Language

• 81.
• be still while I braide your hair Mathilda said
  her
• granmother
• Be still while I braid your hair,
  Mathilda, said her
• grandmother.
• heres the brush but wheres the comb at
• Heres the brush, but wheres the comb?

164
Day 82 - Daily Oral Language

• 82.
• he didnt tell me what he wants to do yesterday
• b. when i spoke to him he seems to be confused
  about
• his plans

165
Day 82 - Daily Oral Language

• 82.
• he didnt tell me what he wants to do yesterday
• He didnt tell me what he wanted to do
  yesterday.
• when i spoke to him he seems to be confused about
  
• his plans
• When I spoke to him, he seemed to be
  confused about his plans.

166
Day 83 - Daily Oral Language

• 83.
• satire may be a good tool for mark twain but i
  find
• it hard to follow
• satirists often resort to exaggeration i think
• overstatement is a sign of not having any
  concrete
• facts to use as support

167
Day 83 - Daily Oral Language

• 83.
• satire may be a good tool for mark twain but i
  find
• it hard to follow
• Satire may be a good tool for Mark Twain,
  but I find
• it hard to follow.
• satirists often resort to exaggeration i think
• overstatement is a sign of not having any
  concrete
• facts to use as support
• Satirists often resort to exaggeration I
  think overstatement is a sign of not having any
  concrete facts to use as support.