Unit One : Write for Conciseness

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Unit One Write for Conciseness
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• All inputs are combined by engineers to create a
  product.
• Revised Engineers combine all inputs to create
  a product.

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• Three phases of analysis are included in their
  approach.
• Revised Their approach includes three phases of
  analysis.

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• A statistical comparison is made of the proposed
  procedures with Taguchi's two-step procedure.
• Revised The proposed procedures and Taguchi's
  two-step procedure are statistically compared.

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• A more efficient combination among the factor
  levels is achieved when the control factor is
  continuous.
• Revised The factor levels are more efficiently
  combined when the control factor is continuous.

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• Factors causing saturation include temperature,
  volume and weight.
• Revised Temperature, volume and weight cause
  saturation.

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• The Taguchi approach entails minimizing the
  average quadratic loss.
• Revised The Taguchi approach minimizes the
  average quadratic loss.

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• There have been a considerable amount of studies
  on robust design.
• Revised Robust design has received
  considerable attention.

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• There is a significant difference in control
  levels for the parameter settings.
• Revised The parameter settings significantly
  differ in control levels.

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• The committee made a decision on the question as
  to using an individual mouse or a trackball would
  be more productive.
• Revised The committee decided whether using a
  mouse or a trackball in the workplace would be
  more productive.

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• As a general rule, mice and trackballs serve the
  function of being both used for the same reason.
• Revised As a rule, mice and trackballs are
  both used for the same reason.

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