The cave

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The cave

• WALT write an adventure story
• WILF write an adventure story. Remembering
  paragraphs, adjectives and punctuation.

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Paragraph 1

• Introduce characters
• Where are they?
• Why are they there?
• Describe the mountain.

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Paragraph 1 (example)

• Sam and Bill were twin brothers and for their
  birthday their mam and dad had sent them on a
  climbing holiday because they loved climbing
  mountains. The holiday was in Wales and the
  mountain they were going to climb was massive.

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Paragraph 2

• How did they get ready for their climb?
• What was the weather like when they started?
• How did they feel?

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Paragraph 2 (example)

• The boys got their back packs and prepared for
  the journey. They packed food, water, torch, map
  and matches.
• It was a beautiful morning and the boys felt
  happy and excited as they set off.

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Paragraph 3

• What was it like climbing the mountain?
  ambitious word
• What did they do on the way?

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Paragraph 3 (example)

• It was easy walking to begin with because the
  mountain wasnt very steep.
• At about 1 0clock they stopped and had a picnic.
  Sam told his brother he didnt like the look of
  the dark clouds in the distance and wondered
  whether they should go back, but Bill didnt want
  to.

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Paragraph 4

• Sudden weather change
• Where do they go
• Describe the cave? Ambitious words
• What do they do?
• What happens in the cave?

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Paragraph 4 (example)

• The boys kept climbing but the weather suddenly
  began to get worse. The air became cold and the
  wind very strong. Rain lashed down.
• Sam noticed a cave in front of them which they
  ran into. It was dark so they took out their
  torches. As they shone them around the cave they
  noticed paintings on the wall.
• Bill heard a strange grunting noise at the back
  of the cave.......he crawled forward and in the
  shadows saw a caveman. The boys were scared
  because he looked very dirty and fierce, but soon
  could see that he wasnt going to hurt them. He
  lit a fire to keep them warm. He couldnt speak
  but made signs with his hands.

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Paragraph 5

• Who rescues them?
• How will your story end? Dont go home and have
  tea!!!!!!!

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Paragraph 5 (example)

• After a few hours the boys heard the sound of
  barking dogs. It was a rescue team. Sam and
  Bills parents were worried and had called them.
• They ran out of the cave and for a moment forgot
  about the caveman because they were so happy they
  were going home.
• Safely back in the hotel they decided not to tell
  anyone about their new friend it would stay their
  secret.