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Editing parragraphs

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Which of the following is the BEST way for the
author to begin sentence 2

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• Answer choices

• (1) Discovery channel is highly educational. (2)
  It always has interesting topics. (3) Secondly,
  It gives interesting facts about different
  subjects. (4) Furthermore, it motivates you to
  discover more. (6) All and all Discovery Channel
  is one of the best TV channels

1. Next,
2. Clearly,
3. Finally,
4. First of all,

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Which of the following is the BEST way for the
author to begin sentence 3

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• Answer choices

• (1) Traveling by motor boat is an exhilarating
  experience. (2) First of all, you get to sea
  dolphins or whales in the ocean. (3) Theres no
  speed limit in the ocean, you could go as fast as
  you can (4) Last but not least, traveling by boat
  lets you experience the strength of nature
  through the movement of the waves. (5) All and
  all, boating is fantastic!

1. Next,
2. Secondly,
3. Finally,
4. First of all

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Which of the following is the BEST way for the
author to begin sentence 4

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• Answer choices

• (1) Long boarding is liberating. (2) Fist of all,
  It allows you to get air as you speed through the
  streets. (3) Secondly, It makes you to feel fast
  and in control as you swerve through the
  obstacles. (4) It lets you glide smoothly and
  feel taller than everyone. All and all, long
  boarding is an extreme experience

1. Next,
2. Clearly,
3. Finally,
4. First of all

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Which of the following is the BEST way for the
author to begin sentence 5

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• Answer choices

• (1) Camping in the mountains is an experience
  that you should consider carefully. (2) First of
  all, you have to sleep in a flimsy tent. (3)
  Secondly, the weather might not be very pleasant.
  (4) Last but not least, you might encounter a
  bear, a snake or a mountain lion. (5) Camping in
  the mountains is not for everyone

1. Next,
2. Clearly,
3. Finally,
4. First of all

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Which of the following is the BEST way for the
author to begin sentence 6

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• Answer choices

• (1) How would you like to go fishing? (2) I love
  going fishing with my family. (3) First of all
  you dont have to bring snack, you catch the
  snack. (4) Secondly, you spend quality time with
  your family. (5) Finally, fishing is fun and
  entertaining. (6) Fishing is a great outdoors
  activity.

1. All and all,
2. Next,
3. Finally,
4. First of all