Savoring an Essay

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Savoring an Essay
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Hook
Introductory Paragraph
Body paragraphs
Conclusion
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Introductory Paragraph

• Hook
• Should attract the reader (cherry)
• Should be short and sweet

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Some options for the hook

• Question dont make the topic into a question.
• -dont answer the question right away
• Anecdote keep it short
• -make sure the connection is made
• Imagine statement draw a picture
• -give specific details
• Quote pay attention to punctuation
• -include who said it

Do you have a favorite holiday? My favorite
holiday is
BORING!!!
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Background Information

• What is it? The information after the hook and
  before the thesis.
• Purpose BUILD UP to the thesis
• What does the audience need to know about this
  TOPIC?
• Its the link between the hook and thesis
  statement
• Will be about 2 3 sentences
• Note It can sometimes overlap with the hook.

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Thesis Statement

• Topic Focus 3 reasons
• Topic always given to you
• Focus what you decide to write about
• 3 reasons should support your focus
• Thesis should be the last sentence in your
  introductory paragraph.
• Only ONE Sentence.

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Example Introductory Paragraph
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Hook

• As I walk into the store, I am immediately
  immersed in a world of hearts, pink and red
  decorations, I Love You balloons, teddy bears,
  red roses, kisses, and chocolates of many
  flavors. The smiles on peoples faces and the
  general climate of love remind me that a special
  day is getting near.

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Background Information

• Valentines Day is a great holiday that is
  celebrated once a year. During this time people
  try to show their loved ones how much they care.
  Its a time of love, friendship, romance, and
  happiness.

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Thesis Statement

• My favorite holiday is Valentines Day because
  during this time I remind people that I care
  about them, I receive chocolates and roses, and I
  spend time with that special person in my life.

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Body Paragraphs

• Transition
• Topic sentence reason 1
• Explain this specific reason
• What do you mean?
• Give a specific example

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Body Paragraph

• To begin with, I love Valentines Day because
  this is a great opportunity to remind people that
  I care about them. Although I try to do this
  often, sometimes its easy to forget. Since its
  important to constantly make those special people
  feel loved, Valentines Day is the perfect
  occasion. Last year I gave notes and flowers to
  my mom and both of my sisters. The were very
  surprised and thankful I made them feel special
  and loved just through this little gift.

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Concluding Paragraph

• Closing transition
• In conclusion
• To sum it up
• Finally
• Restate thesis reword differently, can separate
  into several sentences.
• End with a punch tie it to the hook

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Example

• To conclude, Valentines Day is an awesome
  holiday! During this day I get to eat lots of
  chocolates and receive roses. It is also a great
  opportunity to let others know how special they
  are. Of course, what makes it most special is
  that I get to spend time with my sweetheart. As
  I leave the store, a new feeling of excitement
  invades me. Love is in the air, an amazing
  holiday is on the way, and I have new plans to
  make!