Peer check of Personality Essay

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Peer check of Personality Essay
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MLA FORMAT????
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5 paragraphs?
Introduction following the HIPP format?
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1. Hook - Did they hook you?

• If not give them an idea

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2) Did they introduce the assignment fully
(using at least two of the following)Do What
You Are Myers Briggs Personality Type
Indictator Santiago High SchoolMrs.
MomaneyPeriod ERWC IV

• If not, make a suggestion for what they should add

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In their intro did they have a Position
statement (thesis)

• In other words did they argue whether the Do
  What You Are assessment was accurate or not?
• If so leave it alone.
• If not in margin write I could not find your
  thesis. Were tests accurate or not?

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5 paragraphs?
Introduction
Conclusion??
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Paragraph 5 - Conclusion

• Did they come to a conclusion?
• Do they reintroduce things from their intro
  like Santiago High School,
• And the Do What You Are assessment)
• If not, tell them they need to do so!
• Re-Hook Check out the last sentence did they
  use
• parallel structure
• to end the essay?

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Personality type
Why I am an E
Why I am an N
Why I am an T
Why I am an J
Possible Careers
Radio Broadcaster
Television Journalist
Elementary School Teacher
Extent to which I agree
3rd
social and like to get attention
(www.personalitypage.com)
often acts before they think
(Do What you are)
very self-reliant and makes Their own decisions
(www.personalitypage.com)
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Bonus points if you add the details (sub-sub
points)
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ADD an Outlineand add to/edit your
paper.Resubmit by one week from today!
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