Title: Day 1
1Day 1
The novel Don Quixote was written by the Spanish
writer Miguel de Cervantes.
The novel parodies knights. It also parodies
the literature of chivalry.
Use of underlining or italics with title of book
Use of active voice to improve style
Combining sentences
2Day 1
The Spanish writer Miguel de Cervantes wrote the
novel Don Quixote. Use of active voice to
improve style Use of underlining or italics with
title of book The novel parodies knights and
the literature of chivalry. Combining sentences
3Day 2
Don Quixote didnt fit the stereotype of the
knight in shining armor, in fact he made a
mockery of it.
Cervantes entertained his audience. He poked fun
at the traditional heroic knight.
Use of apostrophe in a contraction
Correct use of semicolon and comma with a
conjunctive adverb
Use of subordinating conjunction to combine
sentences
4Day 2
Don Quixote didnt fit the stereotype of the
knight in shining armor in fact, he made a
mockery of it. Use of apostrophe in a
contraction Correct use of semicolon and comma
with a conjunctive adverb Cervantes entertained
his audience while he poked fun at the
traditional heroic knight. Use of
subordinating conjunction to combine sentences
5Day 3
Don Quixote read many books about chivalry, and
he believed everything he read was true, and he
decided to become a knight-errant himself.
He must of been a comical sight with his tall
skinny body.
Use of commas with coordinate adjective
Correct contraction with helping verb have
Revision of stringy sentence
6Day 3
Don Quixote read many books about chivalry.
Because he believed everything he read was true,
he decided to become a knight-errant
himself. Revision of stringy sentence He
mustve been a comical sight with his tall,
skinny body. Correct contraction with helping
verb have Use of commas with coordinate adjective
7Day 4
Don Quixote is the clumsiest if not the funniest
knight in literature.
Us students laughed at his silly outfit. Others
admired his brave spirit.
Correct pronoun case
Use of comma to set off antithetical material
Use of comma and coordinating conjunction to
combine sentences.
8Day 4
Don Quixote is the clumsiest, if not the
funniest, knight in literature. Use of comma to
set off antithetical material We students
laughed at his silly outfit, but others admired
his brave spirit. Correct pronoun case Use of
commas and coordination conjunction to combine
sentences
9Day 5
By the way this novel was transformed into the
smash musical Man of La Mancha.
In the play, they have very funny scenes of
knights in shining armor, but there are some sad
scenes as well.
Use of comma to set off parenthetical material
Use of underlining or italics with title of play
Use of they without a clear antecedent
10Day 5
By the way, this novel was transformed into the
smash musical Man of La Mancha. Use of comma to
set off parenthetical material Use of
underlining or italics with title of play The
play has very funny scenes of knight in shining
armor, but there are some sad scenes as
well. Use of they without a clear antecedent