Title: The language of Newspapers
1The language of Newspapers
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3QUALITY PAPERS
- Heavies or broadsheet papers
- They have a more serious editorial content and
have longer articles and smaller photos than
tabloids - The Times (tbld) The Sunday Times
- The Guardian The Observer
- The Daily Telegraph The Sunday Telegraph
- The Independent (tbl 2003) The Independent on
Sunday - Scotland
- The Herald Sunday Herald
- The Scotsman Scotland on Sunday
- They are read by better educated readers.
4TABLOIDS
- popular papers
- They have pages half the size of boadsheets
- The Sun News of the World
- Daily Mirror Sunday Mirror
- Daily Express Sunday Express
- Daily Mail The Mail on Sunday
- Daily Sport Sunday Sport
- Daily Star Daily Star Sunday
- The People Sunday People
- They have a large circulation, and are more
popular and sensationalistic.
5Political position of the British newspapers
6Journalistic texts
- The term journalistic may refer to several
kinds of texts contained in a newspaper
advertising, horoscopes, weather reports,
crosswords, business reports, cartoons, film/book
reviews, obituaries, letters to the editor and
agony aunt columns newspaper (a columnist who
answers questions and offers advice on personal
problems to people). - But, the most representative genre is the
informative news report (articles, editorials)
7- Whats the main function/aim of a newspaper text?
- To inform.
- But also to persuade.
8Pragmatic presentation of information
- Major headline, minor headlines (leads)
- Inverted pyramid
- The most important items of information are
presented first, in the various headlines and in
the opening sentences of the text. - Concentration of information into
easily-accessible chunks, but with the risk of
overloading a headline with copious data
(misleading) nominalisation (an efficient way of
condensing and encapsulating information)
9- Orbital pattern
- Most clauses in the text refer back directly to
the headline and lead. - Hypertheme created in the headlines
- Especially in tabloids, in order to create
sensationalism
10Creation of interpersonal communication between
the writer and the reader
- by exploiting many of the characterstics of the
spoken language - 1) the speaker is postplaced (i.e. its time for
IRA truce, says Adams). - 2) quotation of single key words (i.e. IRA
dismisses truce as unworkable) - 3) use of questions to create a kind of dialogue
11Register
- In tabloids more colloquial, familiar language
- Journalese
- Tabloidese
12Always keep in mind the 5 wh Who when what why
where
- Headline summarizes and draws attention to the
story - Lead summarizes and begins to tell the story.
- Original source given in a byline (Reuters) or
built into the text (An official said) - The participants are categorized, their name
often being preceded by a general term and
adjectives (handsome French singer Ives Montand) - Explicit time and place locators (in Paris
yesterday) - Facts and figures
- Direct or indirect quotations
13What about the paragraphs?
- And what about the lexical aspect?
- How is meaning and orientation/opinion conveyed?
- Article
- Language (formal-informal)
- Lexical choices (idioms and expressions)
- Adjectives
- tenses
- Lenght
- Structure
14Text analysis (newspaper article from The
Guardian)
- Does the article answer the five W questions in
the first few paragraphs? - Does the article include all the information you
want to know about the topic? If not, whats
missing? - Is there a photo accompanying the article?
- If so, what information does it provide? Does it
help the reader understand the main point of the
article? - Can you detect any slant or viewpoint in the
article (in the word choice or selection of
facts?) - Does the information in this article differ in
any way from what you have heard on the radio,
seen on tv, or read in another newspaper about
the same event? - Does the article deal with a controversial issue?
If so, are the opposing points of view given
equal space and objective presentation? Can you
tell which side the journalist favors? - Do you consider this article a good example of
clear, objective news reporting? - What are the strengths and weaknesses of this
article? - If an editor had asked you to write this news
story, what would you have done differently?
15NINE GOLDEN RULES OF NEWS-SPEAK
- Most newspapers have their own style book - a
policy statement which lists all the different
rules about the styles of writing, spelling and
language used for the newspaper. This is so that
all articles will follow the same standard rules,
and the papers house-style will be instantly
recognisable.
16- 1 KISS
- Keep It Short and Simple
- Broadsheet newspapers usually have sentences of
30 - 35 words tabloids and local papers normally
carry shorter sentences of 16 - 20 words. - Stay as close to popular speech as you can, and
keep to familiar, simple words - Sentences should be full of bricks, beds,
houses, cars, cows, men and women. - Check the news story you have just written. Did
you KISS it?
17- 2. Reading for Speed
- Everything about a newspaper is set up to enable
you to read it fast. - Sentences and headlines are short, crossheads
between paragraphs break the story down into
bite-sized pieces, columns are narrow and easy to
read. Words should be short too. - 3. Never Use Three Words When One Will Do
- Here are some phrases which you would rarely see
in a newspaper - theyre too wordy. - Can you think of the shorter version using
only one word for each phrase? - In the near future
- In the first instance
- On the subject of
- In the small hours
- In consequence of
- Can you find briefer ways of saying the
following? - The constabulary was able to demonstrate that the
alibi of the defendant was inadequate. - It was approximately twelve noon when the suspect
was apprehended. - A mobile phone is an accessory typical of a young
upwardly mobile person. - She subscribed unequivocally to dedicated support
of Take That.
18- 4. Dont Repeat Yourself
- Keep things short by making sure of the
following - Dont use two words which mean the same - eg.
uniquely special, important essentials, final
outcome. - Try not to repeat a word in the same sentence.
- Avoid words like very, quite, rather - theyre
unnecessary and dont add anything to the
meaning. - 5. Use Active Verbs
- Burglars took the corgi works better than The
corgi was taken by the burglars - and its
shorter.
19- 6. Play With Language - Use Lots Of Puns
- In 1952, journalists at the Daily Express were
told by their proprietor, Lord Beaverbrook, that
he intended to ban the use of puns in headlines
and text. He failed puns are too much fun, and
readers enjoy them too much. Forty years on,
were still groaning at them, and these days
theyre almost as frequent in broadsheet papers
as they are in tabloids. - 7. Make the Story Personal
- News often tries to simplify events to make the
facts easier to understand. One way of doing this
is to link the news story to a particular person
. For example, in reporting the devastating 1995
earthquake in Kobe, Japan, many papers chose to
personalisethe event by telling the story of
particular victims or survivors, mainly British
students, with whom their readers can identify.
In reporting problems in the National Health
Service, journalists often look for a
heartbreaking story of a child whose life is at
risk without expensive private treatment.
20- 8. Categorise People In The News
- In the tabloid and middle-market newspapers,
people are the most important currency - often as
important as the news events themselves. Look
back to the coverage of Jean Kierans and John
Major. - Here is a list of the different ways in which
Jean Kierans was described by the press over two
days in February 1995 - Grey-haired pensioner
- Secret lover
- The driving force behind Majors rise from
- oblivion to Downing Street
- Retired teacher, 65
- Loyal
- Divorcee
- Sultry beauty
- Mother of two
- Beautiful brunette
- Woman who put Premier on path to power
- Ex-lover
21- 9. Things to Avoid
- Almost every newspaper style book contains a list
of donts- forms of language which a good
writer should avoid.
22Headlines
- Headline-writing is considered a very skilled
job. A good headline must - Fit the story and tell the reader clearly what
its about. - Make the reader interested in the story and
want to read on. - On a front page, be visually striking enough to
grab the eye of readers at stations, newsagents,
newsstands,etc. - Reflect the newspapers attitude to the news
story. - Fit into a very limited space.
23Redundant grammatical items are often removed
- Channel raily link decision this week
- Article
- Fresh fruit the pick of the bunch this week
- Copular verb
- Mother tells of babys death at hospital
- possessive
24Headline TechniquesBelow is a list of some of
the forms of language and techniques often used
by headline writers.
- Metaphor implied comparison between two
- unconnected people or things.
- Metonym where the name of a specific object or
idea stands for something else to which it is
related or a part of. Thus, the Royal Family is
often referred to as The Throne, or The Crown
the bottle could mean milk or alcohol. - Mis-spellings words deliberately mis-spelt for
effect, e.g. Gawd for God. - Parody an imitation of a well-known phrase or
saying which is in some way distorted or changed. - Pun a play on words, often with a doublemeaning
- Rhetorical question a question to which no
answer is expected. - Rhyming words ending in identical sounds, e.g.
Pix nix flix in stix. - Slang words or phrases not considered part of
standard English, e.g. fresh, cool, dread.
- Alliteration repeating the same first letter or
syllable (usually a consonant) in successive
words to create a poetic or humorous effect - Assonance repeating certain vowel sounds in the
- same phrase or sentence. (Away Day for Gay Ray)
- Cliché An over-used phrase or expression which
- has lost its originality - e.g. Phew ! What a
scorcher! - Euphemism the use of a polite or pleasant form
of words to describe something less pleasant,
e.g. the little girls room. - Exclamation usually used to indicate surprise,
- sarcasm or amusement, e.g. Gosh!
- Expletives exclamation or swearword, usually
- expressing a strong emotion, and usually deleted
- or substituted by a less offensive word or
sound.
25Nominalisation and pre-modification
- In specialised texts, that is all those texts
that diverge from everyday English, these two are
very frequent phenomena. - Nominalisation is the use of nouns instead of
verbs. Nouns structures are preferred because
they are considered right tools to condense
information. - Example
- What has been decided today is in line with EU
which is planning to improve its financial and
economic situations. (20 words and 4 verbs) - Todays decision is in line with the EUs plans
for economic and financial improvement (14 words,
three nominalisations and 1 verb).
26- Pre-modification is the use of a certain number
of words (usually adjectives and nouns, but also
adverbs) before another main noun that is called
headword. - A simple pre-modification can be bad boy where
the headword boy is premodified by only one
adjective (bad that is called premodifier) - The English language is full of simple
premodifications like this, but specialised texts
often make use of longer and complex
premodifications (made of 3, 4 , 5 or even 6
elements) like - - energy-saving car engines
- - Euro-Mediterranean free-trade area
- - Railway station murder inquiry shock
- - Latin American intra-regional research
networking infrastructure - - United Kingdoms post war geo-strategic future
ambitions - WHICH IS THE HEADWORD?
- HOW COULD YOU TRANSLATE THESE IN ITALIAN ??? ???
???
27Lexical density
- Taylors definition of LD
- LD refers to the proportion of lexical words
(that is words which carry meaning, such as
verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs) in a text
compared to the number of function words
(pronouns, prepositions, conjunctions, copular
verbs ect.). - Examples boy, car, eat, go, poor, nice,
friendly, kindly etc. are lexical words, while
for, to, the, than, and, of etc. are function
words. - Written language is usually much denser than
spoken language, - AND specialised texts are even denser from a
lexical point of view. - Read the texts and compare them in terms of
lexical density - 1) Rubbish incineration in the context of this
scientific article is the combining of oxygen
with noxious material to form harmless non-toxic
compounds, usually carbon dioxide and water - 2) I try to explain to her that I feel like the
Rejection Man and that she wanted to sleep with
Chris because he is cooler than me.
28- Read the previous list carefully. Then try and
match each form of expression up with a headline
which uses that particular technique to make its
meaning. - Oh Gawd, shes here.
- No go in Soho
- Away Day for Gay Ray
- WHAT A DI!
- Saucy Sarahs Sex Secrets with Secretary of State
- Clarkes bummer for the summer
29Now read the following outline story.
- Top pop singer Madonna has announced her
intention to give up her controversial and
massively successful musical career in order to
attend university and retrain as a doctor.
30- With a partner, try and create a headline of your
own for the story.
31- Read again the following headlines.
- Oh Gawd, shes here.
- WHAT A DI!
- No go in Soho
- Away Day for Gay Ray
- Saucy Sarahs Sex Secrets with Secretary of State
- Clarkes bummer for the summer
- Work out what kind of news item you think they
refer to, and write the first paragraph of the
accompanying story of one of them.
32- ROYAL traitor Major James
- Hewitt claimed yesterday he had
- a five-year affair with Princess Diana.
- He says they made love at
- Kensington Palace, Highgrove, at
- Dianas family estate Althorp and
- in Devon.
- Details of their grand passion
- are revealed for the first time by
- journalist Anna Pasternak, with
- Hewitts full co-operation, in the
- kiss-and-tell book Princess in
- Love.
- It describes how Diana believed
- the Life Guards officer, now
- dubbed Britains biggest bounder,
- was someone to trust after Prince
- Charles rejected her.
- She had recognised it instantly.
But last night Diana was said to have told close
friends I have never slept with Hewitt.
One friend said The Princess is telling people
James made it all up. She is very upset and angry
over these allegations. Hewitt was obsessed with
Diana and everything he has said is a product of
his fevered imagination. . . a lot of what
Hewitt says in the book has been embellished,
the friend added. The Princess regards the book
as the ultimate betrayal and is said to feel
deeply hurt and bitterly disappointed. Hewitt
even claims Diana was so in love she planned to
leave Charles for Hewitt. The book says She
told him how she wanted to marry him, how she
yearned to have his child.
33Descriptions Of Witnesses
- In the coverage of the Princess Di and James
Hewitt story, James Hewitt is described in a
variety of ways - Money-grabbing James Hewitt Love-rat (The Sun)
- Kiss-and-tell cavalryman James Hewitt (Daily
Mail) - Royal traitor Major James Hewitt (Express)
- Former Cavalry Officer Major James Hewitt
(Guardian) -
- What impression is created by each phrase? What
is the effect of putting the description first
and the name last? Which of these descriptions
can be proved to be truthful? - Whose Side Are They On?
- Check out exactly whose words or opinions have
been used in an article. - In the story above, how many times has James
Hewitt, or any of his friends or colleagues, been
quoted? - What effect does this have on your understanding
of the story? -
34Tabloid vs. Broadsheet or Popular vs. Quality?
- Tabloid newspapers have often been accused of
being sensational - a term of abuse when aimed at
the press. But the comments below, published in
the early 1950s on the front page of the Daily
Mirror by the editor, Sylvester Bolam (Editor
1948-1953) suggest some of the more positive
aspects of sensationalism.
35- The Mirror is a sensational newspaper. We make
no apology for that. We believe in the
sensational presentation of news and views,
especially important news and views, as a
necessary and valuable public service in these
days of mass readership and democratic
responsibility. - We shall go on being sensational to the best of
our ability... - Sensationalism does not mean distorting the
truth. It means the vivid and dramatic
presentation of events so as to give them a
forceful impact on the mind of the reader. - It means big headlines, vigorous writing,
simplification into familiar, everyday language,
and the wide use of illustration by cartoon and
photograph... - As in larger, so in smaller and more personal
affairs, the Mirror and its millions of readers
prefer the vivid to the dull and the vigorous to
the timid. - No doubt we make mistakes, but we are at least
alive.
36- Here is a simple news story which would not have
appeared in a national newspaper. - Read it carefully. Then, with a partner, try and
rewrite the story so that it could be published
on the front page. One of you should rewrite the
story for a tabloid newspaper, and the other for
a broadsheet newspaper. - When you have finished your rewritten versions,
try and work out exactly what you did with each
one to make them printable. - Make a list of all the changes you made, and why
you made them. - Give your piece a title.
37- In the middle of the night last night, some
burglars broke into Buckingham Palace and got
away with a whole heap of the Queens most
valuable jewellery as well as kidnapping her
favourite corgi whose name was Tootles and who
slept in the Queens bedroom with her. The Queen
wasnt actually around that night as she was away
on her tour of Japan with Prince Philip, but her
ladies in-waiting were, and they were terrified
and extremely worried about Tootles who is quite
old and needs a special diet so he does not get
too overweight.