Title: Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy from Mean Time [1998]
1Havisham by Carol Ann Duffyfrom Mean Time
1998
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4- She was dressed in rich materials satins, and
lace, and silks all of white. Her shoes were
white. And she had a long white veil dependent
from her hair, and she had bridal flowers in her
hair, but her hair was white. Some bright jewels
sparkled on her neck and on her hands, and some
other jewels lay sparkling on the table. Dresses,
less splendid than the dress she wore, and
half-packed trunks were scattered about. She had
not quite finished dressing, for she had but one
shoe on the other was on the table near her
hand her veil was half arranged, her watch and
chain were not put on, and some lace for her
bosom lay with those trinkets and with her
handkerchief, and gloves, and some flowers, and a
prayer-book, all confusedly heaped about the
looking-glass. - It was not in the first moments that I saw all
these things, though I saw more of them in the
first moments than might be supposed. But, I saw
that everything within my view which ought to be
white, had been white long ago, and had lost its
lustre, and was faded and yellow. I saw that the
bride within the bridal dress had withered like
the dress, and like the flowers, and had no
brightness left but the brightness of her sunken
eyes. I saw that the dress had been put upon the
rounded figure of a young woman, and that the
figure upon which it now hung loose, had shrunk
to skin and bone. Once, I had been taken to see
some ghastly wax-work at the Fair, representing I
know not what impossible personage lying in
state. Once, I had been taken to one of our old
marsh churches to see a skeleton in the ashes of
a rich dress, that had been dug out of a vault
under the church pavement. Now wax-work and
skeleton seemed to have dark eyes that moved and
looked at me. I should have cried out, if I
could. - Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, p50
5Learning Intentions
- I will develop a knowledge and understanding of
the complexities of poetic language. - I will convey information using specialist
terminology, analysis and evaluation of texts. - I will persuade, argue and evaluate using
supporting evidence from the text. - I will structure a convincing analytical
examination of key areas of the text. In written
and spoken forms. - I will make relevant notes and organise them in a
coherent way to create new texts. - I will read primary and secondary sources to
expand my understanding of texts. - I will present my ideas in a fluent way that is
appropriate to my audience. - I will examine the interpretation of
written/spoken/ performed texts and evaluate
effectiveness.
6Collaborative Learning
- All must take notes.
- All must present findings to whole class.
- All must contribute to discussions and
presentations. - --------------------------------------------------
---Groups could study Characters, Themes,
Language, Key Scene, Symbols, Motifs, Conflict,
Denouement, Climax, Dialogue.
7Introduction
- Restate the question in your own words. (Use key
words from the task). - Mention the name of the writer and the title of
the text. - State your intentions. (How are you going to
answer the question / complete the task). - FOCUS ON THREE AREAS IF POSSIBLE. TART
8TART
- Title of text
- Author
- Response to question/topic.
- Techniques and aspects you will examine.
- --------------------------------------------------
---- - Attempt to be stylish and intelligent but above
all else keep your writing clear and
intelligible.
9Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- Write about a poem that deals with the subject of
love. - Examine how the poet explores the subject and
explain to what extent you found the treatment
effective. - You may consider theme, structure, imagery,
tone, mood, symbolism, character, narrative voice
and style.
10Essay Question 2
- Choose a poem which takes a pessimistic view ob
some aspectsof life. - Briefly state what the poem is about and go on to
show how the techniques used convey these
pessimistic feelings. - In your answer you must refer to the text and to
at least two of tone, word choice, imagery,
rhythm, or any other appropriate feature.
11Essay Question 3
- Choose a poem that communicates the experience of
loss or isolation. - Show how the poet communicates the experience in
a way you found meaningful. - In your answer you must refer to the text and to
at least two of tone, word choice, imagery,
rhythm, or any other appropriate feature.
12Essay Question 4
- Choose a poem that creates an interesting,
tragic, sinister or humorous character. - Show how the poet uses various poetic techniques
to make the character feel real to you. - You may consider theme, structure, imagery,
tone, mood, symbolism, character, narrative voice
and style.
13Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- How far does the poet want us to sympathize with
Havisham? List elements of sympathy / disgust - Why does the reader have to know about Great
Expectations to understand the poem? - Does Havisham have a fair view of men? What do
you think of her view of being an unmarried
woman? - Perhaps the most important part of the poem is
the question who did this/to me? Discuss. - How far does the poem show that Havisham is
responsible for her own misery, and how far does
it support her feelings of self-pity and her
desire for revenge?
14Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- Explain how the word stink expresses
self-loathing. - What does it mean that Duffy has used great
economy of language? - How effectively does Duffy convey the idea that
Havisham hates the word spinster? - Discuss in turn what each colour represents and
what Duffy is trying to convey through its use. - Other than the wedding celebration, what could
the red balloon which bursts symbolise?.
15Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- In your groups prepare a presentation on your
stanza. Examine - Mood, imagery,
- Characterisation, themes,
- Narrative voice and tone
- Structure and word choice.
- Symbolism and literary devices
- --------------------------------------------------
----------------------- - Enjambement, metaphor, simile, oxymoron,
dark imagery, climax, - Analyse word choice and aspects of punctuation.
- You should also refer to how mood is created,
- How Duffy uses characterisation, tone and
symbolism
16Mood, imagery, 5D1Tristan, Matthew, Jack
- Beloved Sweetheart bastard oxymoron hateful
mood established. - Ropes death/strangulation/murder
- dark green pebbles, sickly colour, decay.
Jealousy, stone like gaze, windows to the soul
and Havisham has closed her soul to the outside
world. Medusa connections as her harsh gaze could
turn you to stone. - Spinster. Minor sentence implies self-loathing,
solitude and loneliness. Sounds menacing due to
hissing s. - Cawing NOOOO at the wall. Crowlike sound,
connotations of death, decay. onomatopoeia
Neologism new word Dehumanises her
sounds/language. In denial of her loneliness. - Image of a tragic, lonely, desperate, bitter
character, who relives her pain in isolation
every day. - Lost body fluent tongue Bite Awake. Fantasy
imagery, dreamworld is where she sometimes feels
better. Sexual connotations of wedding night
that never was. - Puce curses that are sounds not words sibilance
creates menace, hissing s sound. Her evil intent
cannot be voiced through language and becomes
unintelligible sounds of bitterness and despair. - Yellowing dress, white wedding dress becomes a
symbol of decay and decomposition as opposed to
love and unity. - Loves hate behind a white veil. oxymoron
- Red balloon. Symbolises her heart
breaking/exploding. Bang! Onomatopoeia to
emphasise the impact on her. - Stabbing a wedding cake seems a violent attack on
the concept of marriage. - Male corpse long, slow honeymoon. Images of
death and isolation create a sinister, murderous
mood. - B-b-b-breaks, mind, body and heart breaks. Image
of broken woman, solitary and isolated. We
sympathise
17Mood/Imagery. 5A1 Omar, Nicola Amy
- Opening lines suggest anger in the narrative
voice. Cathartic/dramatic monologue. Hatred
against men/marriage. - Dark Green Pebbles Jealousy, cold stone like
view the world. - Ropes I could strangle with violent death
connotations, Tied to the situation. Suggests old
age also. - Sinister mood, Gothic imagery.
- Stanza 2 continues to be sinister and introduces
personal bitterness from the character/narrator. - Sexual fantasy that is dreamlike. Lost Body. Bite
Awake!!! Reality and allusion - Cawing NOOOO at the wall. Neologism creating new
words for situations. Negative wordchoice and
sound effect hyperbole enhances the menace in
the statement - Puce curses S sounds hissing alliteration/sibilan
ce No language can turn the sounds into
meaning. Her evil intent is expressed in sounds
only. - Mood changes in last stanza to sympathy due to
the change in tone. The harsh tone is replaced by
what appears to be the narrator b-b-b-breaking
down - Almost like a letter at start and end.
18Characterisation, themes, 5D1Abbie, Sheraine,
Emma
- Title Havisham is her family/maiden/single name.
Her title would have been Miss. She omits this
as she is embarrassed by her rejection and
isolation. - She is decomposing as a person physically and
mentally. Yellowing, spinster, stink. - She is lonely and isolated. Gothic figure
- Stuck in time and place, she looks into her
wardrobe trembling. She gazes into the past to
remember how things could have been. - Ropes suggest murderous intentions.
- Who did this to me? Self-denial? Blaming someone
else? Central question of the poem. She is
responsible for her current situation but
circumstances from the past influenced her
decisions and her behaviour. - B-b-b-breaks signifies her breakdown emotionally
and mentally. - Themes Anger, aggression, embarrassment,
isolation, suffering, love, hate and despair.
Death, betrayal, embitterment, FEAR!!!!!!
19Characterisation, themes, Polly, Susan, Jodie,
Ilona
- Havisham title suggests no gender, possibly a
place or object. We consider Miss as having
connotations of youth, unmarried status. The
narrator is old, was jilted at the alter and is
now embittered and driven by hatred. CA Duffy
removed the prefix Miss to add mystery and menace
to the character. - Not a day since then Shows she lives in the past
and dwells on the incidents that made her what
she has become. Wishes/prays for death!!!! word
choice/imagery - Spinster. Word seems spat out in disgust. It
makes her feel unloved, betrayed, unwanted. She
becomes something she never wanted to be,
ALONE!!!! The word sounds like a curse to
HERSELF. Hissing s sounds sinister and
shocking. - I stink and remember suggests her physical and
emotional decay and the fact that she can only
live in the past. She sees no happy future. - Whole days in bed cawing NOOOO at the wall.
- Dream world is where she feels sometimes
better. She dreams of her lover lost body
corpse like image Bites awake violently she is
jolted back to reality. - Stabbed wedding cake metaphor for killing her
memories of her wedding day. She may also be
killing all things associated with the
institution of marriage including the man! Theme
of confusion, as ironically she wanted to be
married and is now alone. - THEMES revenge, self-hatred, self-destruction,
isolation, jealousy, separation, desperation,
death. Poem is a statement of grief.
20Narrative voice and tone 5D1Zoe, Matthew, Nicola,
Lorna, Zoe
- Strong and violent word choices create a
aggressive, violent and disturbing tone. Stab,
strangle, dead, ropes. - 1st person narrative cathartic, personal,
emotional. Dramatic monologue tells her story. - Stream of Consciousness thoughts, memories,
actions, speech and observations creating a
rambling, garbled effect. - Suggests narrator may be mentally disturbed in
this context. - Where we may expect exclamation marks there are
none. This gives the poem a harsh, matter of fact
tone that creates a disturbing mood and narrative
voice. - Tone changes Spinster. Stink, NOOO at the wall.
Suggests she cannot identify herself in a
positive way. She describes herself using
abstract nouns her, spinster that emphasises
her loneliness, her lack of companionship, her
isolation from society. Tone is bitter and
pessimistic. - Who did this/to me? Rhetorical question tone
is tragically pitiful, she knows the answer is
herself. The reader sees her now as a victim
rather than a potential killer. - Dream world takes her away from reality. Bites
awake. Violent image jolts her back to reality.
She has to escape and dreaming still reminds her
of her situation. - Tone in last line changes from bitter, violent
and aggressive to sad and afraid. - The repetition may suggest her heart breaking
repeatedly, day after day and every day. - It may suggest the last beats of her heart.
21Narrative voice and tone 5A2 Liam, Connor,
Michael, Sarah
- Tone seems emotional yet detached at the start
due to the irony of the comment. Oxymoron - First person narrative I makes it more personal
and cathartic. - Dark green pebbles for eyes symbolic of
jealousy. Connotations of stone give the image a
harsh and menacing quality. - Cawing NOOOO at the wall. Suggests self-pity.
Connotations of a crow sound, links to theme of
death. Neologism creates new word to signify her
pain. No is a very negative word choice, and she
can only scream it at the wall. This shows the
reader how isolated and lonely she has become.
Her tone is desperate and terrifying, but also
appears afraid and vulnerable. - Who did this to me? She questions her own
appearance. She seems surprised and shocked by
what she sees in the slewed mirror. The
distorted reflection seems to appear to her as a
physical manifestation of her mental state. She
has become a twisted vision of a bride and cannot
comprehend how this has happened. - Trembling at opening the wardrobe shows her fear
and reluctance to face her reality. She looks
into her past and finds disappointment and
rejection. Dresses never worn remind her of her
situation and isolation. - Puce curses that are sounds not words.
Supernatural blood coloured oaths suggest evil
intent and the tone now seems murderous. Verbal
poison flows from her to her ex fiance. The
hissing s sound makes the tone menacing and
shows that her words are now only garbled sounds.
She cannot put her feelings into words and only
evil sounds come from her lips. - Word choices, throughout, create a menacing,
disturbing tone. Mood is sinister and tense.
Corpse, Loves hate behind a white veil. Images
are dark / gothic / shocking. - Tone in last line changes from bitter, violent
and aggressive to sad and afraid. - The repetition may suggest her heart breaking
repeatedly, day after day and every day. - It may suggest the last beats of her heart.
22Structure and word choice.5D1Breagh, Lewis Rebecca
- 4x4 lined stanzas very tightly controlled
structure. - Enjambement allows the lines to flow from stanza
to stanza to create a rambling - STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS effect. That is cathartic
and a dramatic monologue. - S of C thoughts, reflections, words, actions,
speech and memories to create a MONTAGE effect
that compresses Time, Space and Action. - TWENTY YEARS OF SOLITUDE, HATRED AND DECAY, IN A
TWENTY SECOND POEM!!!!! - --------------------------------------------------
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--------------------------- - She talks about killing
- She discusses what she has done to herself
- Fantasy scenes of what could have been for her.
- Anger, embarrassment and breakdown,
- Bites awake moves her from dreamstate to
reality. - Spinster. Minor, one word sentence. Negative
connotations meaning loneliness, single life,
isolation, lacking love? Sounds menacing due to
hissing s? - Yellowing white purity of wedding dress gone
and the purity of her love. 20 years of isolation
has led to her physical and mental decay. Yellow
has connotations of disease. - Lost body over me romantic dream of her
husband. Suggests death, loss and, ironically,
love. She still pictures herself with him as
young lovers. - Red balloon bursting in my face anger,
embarrassment, humiliation. Red balloon may
symbolise her heart, not just b-b-b-breaking,
but dramatically exploding. - Cawing crow-like cry onomatopoeia. Links to
her older state/death - Beloved sweetheart bastard. start
b-b-b-breaks. end - Starts and ends on plosive b sounds creating a
cycle of her pain. Her vulnerability and fear are
shown at the end and her she seems to hide behind
a mask of hatred - loves hate behind a white
veil - at the start to cope with her rejection
everyday.
23Structure and word choice. Lauren M, Sophie,
Laura, Lauren H
- Start and end of poem appear climactic. Plosive
b sound creates a dramatic impact on the
reader. It sounds harsh and emphatic and creates
a cyclical effect. Starts with an oxymoron
beloved sweetheart bastard and ends with
mentioning the heart that b-b-b-breaks. By using
references to hearts at the start and end we
see how CA Duffy creates a unity in imagery. - A sweetheart and a broken heart create a
symmetry to the poem and puts the heart as a
symbol of love in different contexts. - Green pebbles suggest jealousy, decay, disease.
Spinster. Isolation / loneliness / lack of
identity / completion. - Harsh violent words dead, ropes, strangle,
corpse, stabbed, bang. - 4x4 line stanzas- 1 she discusses the man who
left her. 2 Describes herself. 3 Fantasy world. 4
She describes her decline into despair and
relates to the circumstances that led to her
isolation.
24Symbolism and literary devices Jed, Grant, Euan,
Jordan
- Green pebbles symbol of jealousy, envy, decay,
disease. Stonelike eyes, harshness of her glare
on the world. - Death drives her purpose, it is her reason for
living. - Ropes old, death, strangling,
- Yellowing old, decaying,
- Stink connotations of decay, self loathing,
awareness of her decline. Physical and
emotional - Trembling ambiguous, she/dress trembles.
- Cawing NOOOO image of isolation, sadness and
fear. - Spinster. Symbolic of single female. Tone is
disgusted and afraid. Her identity is consumed by
her unmarried status. Hissing s sound makes this
minor sentence sinister. Sibilance. She may be in
denial that she will never be married and that is
the cause of her emotional turmoil. - PATHOS suffering grief Gk. Evoking strong
feelings of pity or sorrow. - Who did this/to me? ambiguous
- Confronting herself for her position and
condition? In denial of the fact that she is
responsible? - Colour symbolism Puce curses. Blood colour,
- Wedding cake, symbolises the institution of
marriage. Stabbed she murders the concept of
marriage. - PATHOS pathetic lonely figure, we feel deeply
sympathetic even though she appears hateful,
bitter and murderous to us. Her heart breaks
constantly. The bbbbreaks may be the last beats
of a tragic, lovelorn heart.
25Symbolism and literary devices Bonnie, Michelle,
Jodie, Danielle, Jordan
- Start is dramatic! Alliteration, Harsh b.
- Wish him dead/prayed for it Metaphorical murder
is desired by H. This murder only takes place in
Hs mind, her life is played out in the past in
her mind. This suggests her mental instability
and her lack of action, as she seems to be a
total recluse. - Colour symbolism Green jealousy symbol. puce
sibilance hissing s, white purity, IRONY,
oxymoron on love, red metaphor for her life
exploding/heart bursting, yellow age, decay,
decline - Rope death, age, wringing emotions. SYMBOL
- Spinster. Minor sentence. A title of a single
woman. Just as miss is - the word CA Duffy
omitted from the title. - Her identity is embodied in this word. She is the
word she hates most. She appears to spit the word
out at the world!!!!! - Cawing crow sound, onomatopoeia, NOOOO
neologism, creates the sound of despair and
isolation. At the wall no one to speak to
illustrates solitude and loneliness. IMAGE OF
FEMALE ISOLATION AND PATHOS!!!!!!!!!!!! - Lost body Bite awake. Fantast IMAGERY. Dream
world, escape. - Loves hate behind a white veil. She is a
personified as a symbol of love as a bride.
This changes to hate as the red balloon of
her hopes explodes in front of her when she is
rejected at the alter - Wedding cake symbolises marriage. Stabbed
suggests her killing the concept of marriage.
26Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
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Beloved sweetheart bastard. Not a day since
then I havent wished him dead. Prayed for it
so hard Ive dark green pebbles for eyes, ropes
on the back of my hands I could strangle with.
Spinster. I stink and remember. Whole days in
bed cawing Nooooo at the wall the dress
yellowing, trembling if I open the wardrobe
the slewed mirror, full-length, her, myself, who
did this to me? Puce curses that are sounds not
words. Some nights better, the lost body over
me, my fluent tongue in its mouth in its ear
then down till I suddenly bite awake. Loves - hate behind a white veil a red balloon
bursting in my face. Bang. I stabbed at a
wedding-cake. Give me a male corpse for a long
slow honeymoon. Dont think its only the heart
that b-b-b-breaks.
27Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- Havisham
- by Carol Ann Duffy
- Background
- This poem is a monologue spoken by Miss
Havisham, a character in Dickens' Great
Expectations. - Jilted by her scheming fiancé, she continues to
wear her wedding dress and sit amid the remains
of her wedding breakfast for the rest of her
life, while she plots revenge on all men. - She hates her spinster state - of which her
unmarried family name constantly reminds her
(which may explain the choice of title for the
poem).
28Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- Summary of Poem
- She begins by telling the reader the cause of her
troubles - her phrase beloved sweetheart
bastard is a contradiction in terms (called an
oxymoron). - She tells us that she has prayed so hard (with
eyes closed and hands pressed together) that her
eyes have shrunk hard and her hands have sinews
strong enough to strangle with - which fits her
murderous wish for revenge. - (Readers who know Dickens' novel well might think
at this point about Miss Havisham's ward, Estella
- her natural mother, Molly, has strangled a
rival, and has unusually strong hands.)
29Characterisation.
- Havisham is aware of her own stink - because she
does not ever change her clothes nor wash. - She stays in bed and screams in denial.
- At other times she looks and asks herself who
did this to her? - She sometimes dreams almost tenderly or
erotically of her lost lover, but when she wakes
the hatred and anger return. - Thinking of how she stabbed at the wedding cake
she now wants to work out her revenge on a male
corpse - presumably that of her lover.
30Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- Structure
- The poem is written in four stanzas which are
unrhymed. Many of the lines run on, and the
effect is like normal speech. The poet - uses many adjectives of colour - green, puce,
white and red and - lists parts of the body eyes, hands,
tongue, mouth, ear and face. - Sometimes the meaning is clear, but other lines
are more open - and there are hints of violence
in strangle, bite, bang and stabbed. It
is not clear what exactly Miss Havisham would
like to do on her long slow honeymoon, but we
can be sure that it is not pleasant.
31Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- Questions
- Why does the poet omit Havisham's title and refer
to her by her surname only? - Why does the poet write spinster on its own?
What does Havisham think about this word and its
relevance to her? - What is the effect of Nooooo and b-b-breaks?
Why are these words written in this way? - What is the meaning of the image of a red
balloon bursting?
32Havisham by Carol Ann Duffy
- How far does the poet want us to sympathize with
Havisham? - Does the reader have to know about Great
Expectations to understand the poem? - Does Havisham have a fair view of men? What do
you think of her view of being an unmarried
woman? - Perhaps the most important part of the poem is
the question who did this/to me? How far does
the poem show that Havisham is responsible for
her own misery, and how far does it support her
feelings of self-pity and her desire for revenge?
33Stanza 1
- The opening line portrays the order of events.
"Beloved sweetheart bastard." - The man she describes was someone special but
soon became someone she hated. - She has longed for revenge as the reader is told,
"Not a day since then I haven't wished for him
dead." - The words "prayed" also tie in with this deep
seated longing for change. - The imagery of her eyes being like "Dark green
pebbles" hints to the hardness of stone but also
the green is jealousy. - She has become trapped by obsession thinking,
praying and waiting for her fiance.
34Stanza 2
- The word "Spinster" is a minor one word sentence,
almost spat out in distaste. Havisham describes
her condition "I stink and remember" the words
refer to her smell from wearing the same clothes
but also the stench of the terrible thing that
has happened to her. - The events have changed her and there is real
sadness and fear behind the words. - Her wedding dress is described as "yellowing" as
she questions how she has ended up in this
situation.
35Stanza 3
- The final part of the previous stanza merges into
this third verse and the disjointedness reflects
Havisham's own distress. - This stanza hints that sometimes she can feel
happy and when she is bed asleep for a moment it
as if she is still with her lover, but the strong
words "bite awake" describe the gnawing pain of
having lost a loved one. - The dream is only a dream and life is difficult
to live with.
36Stanza 4
- Love is personified and the narrator describes
herself as "Love's hate behind a white veil" - Love enjoys hurting her and again this is
emphasised with her description of the balloon
"bursting in my face." - Balloons are supposed to be fun like love but in
this instance it becomes something shocking ready
to spoil her happiness. - Havisham also describes at destroying her wedding
cake, "I stabbed at a wedding-cake." This
describes not only her pain, but the pain she
would like to inflict on someone else. - The imagery of a honeymoon is coupled with the
words "male corpse" this also shows her unfeeling
towards men. - She doesn't want something living, she wants
something dead. The very last word comes out in a
stutter when she talks about how a heart
"b-b-b-breaks" this shows sadness and madness at
the same time. - When she talks about her heart not being the only
one that is broken it reminds us of Pip from
"Great Expectations", she's been hurt and knows
how to break a man's heart. In the case of Pip,
she wanted to crush his dreams of gaining an
education.