Title: Cause and Effect
1Cause and Effect
2Outline
- Pattern
- Logic
- Avoid Generalization
- Avoid vague terms or unexamined premises
3Pattern of Argumentation a suggestion
- A. Introduction
- Arousing interest emotion appeal
- State your position.
- B. Body
- Clarify your major argument, and then give
sufficient reasons to support your position. - Indicate one or two of the more important
arguments against your position. - Refute the positions you have just stated.
- Present additional arguments in support of your
position.
4Pattern of Argumentation a suggestion (2)
- C. Conclusion
- Restate your position on the issue.
- Present an emotional appeal for your position,
perhaps warning what might happen if your
position is not accepted.
5Pattern e.g. 1 for Cohabitation
- Blanket Relationship
- Emancipation Relationship
- Convenience Relationship
- Testing Relationship
- How do we develop these ideas to support
cohabitation? - If the premise is c. for mutual understanding
- Major Causes Love Convenience
- Two possible extreme Emancipation Relationship
Blanket Relationship - For whatever reasons, it is a chance to test if
the relationship will last.
6Pattern e.g. 2
- Against killing stray dogs
- Against religious spirit
- disobeys the humanity.
- a waste of our economical resources in the
society - spend limited money on the medical expense for
curing those sick stray dogs, and then ask for
some kind hearted people to foster them
7Faulty Logic? Simplify the issue Failure to
account for the various reasons
- increasing divorce Rate ? college couples
cohabitation
8Faulty Logic? Faulty connection
- In fact, personally I think that cohabitation is
a way to shirk the duties of marriage but to
enjoy the benefits of marriage. However, when two
of young students decide to live together, they
have to think about the results beforehand but
not just enjoy the present time. Nowadays, we can
see the rate of cohabitation of student couples
increase and it shows some signs for us and is
worthy to discuss this problem.
9Clear introduction of problems Development by
gradation
- (introduction) Nowadays, we can see the rate of
cohabitation of student couples increase and it
shows some signs? for us and is worthy to discuss
this problem. (lack of commitment, recklessness) - In fact, personally I think that cohabitation is
a way to shirk marital duties involved in making
a lifelong commitment to join efforts and build a
family. What the couples have in mind are just
love and enjoyment for the moment. - Long-term consequences Even if the student
couple are truly committed to loving each
other, there are some negative social
consequences they have to face. - ? Pregnancy ? loss of love
10Faulty Logic? Faulty connection
- Homosexual parenting results in gender confusion
furthermore, it makes children more likely to
experiment with homosexual behavior or become
homosexuals in the future. Frankly speaking, I
strongly disagree with the idea that the best
household consists of a father and a mother. Good
parenting is not influenced by sexual
orientation.
- Homosexual parenting results in gender confusion
furthermore, it makes children more likely to
experiment with homosexual behavior or become
homosexuals in the future. Frankly speaking, I
strongly disagree with the idea that the best
household consists of a father and a mother. Good
parenting is not influenced by sexual
orientation.
11Re-ordering and modifying the statements
- Indeed, having homosexual parents allows the
children to have plural choices in gender
orientation, and have more freedom to be
homosexuals if they want to. Homosexual
parenting, however, does not lead to homosexual
children, whereas unhappy heterosexual families
have been a known cause for homosexuality.
Actually, since homosexual marriage and adoption
have been so difficult, those homosexual couples
who become parents after careful consideration
and screening by the social workers, I believe,
must be responsible for their decision and become
much better parents than some heterosexual
parents who give birth to children accidentally
and are thus unprepared for them emotionally and
financially.
12Avoid Generalization
- As the minority in the society, homosexuals are
not the abnormal group though. Compared with some
heterosexual parents, who abandoned their
children and committed child abuse, homosexuals
are capable of playing the role as good parents
as heterosexuals or even better. Therefore, the
quality of parenting is not related to the gender
of parents.
13Cause and Effect -- In most situations, more
than one cause or effect is involved
- Specific wording, modification
- (100) wholly. (99) Practically
all of - (95) almost entirely (90) Nearly all
- (80) By far the greater part of his fortune...
- (70) The greater part of his fortune...
- (60) More than half of his fortune...
- (55) Rather more than half of his fortune...
- (45) Nearly half of (40) A large part
of - (30) A considerable part of (25) Part of
- (15) A very small part of (10) Not much of
- (5) A very small part (1) An
inconsiderable part of - (0) None of his fortune..(source)
14Premise
- According to the religious point of view, all
kinds of lives should be respected equally, no
matter to human or any other animals of course
including the stray dogs. If we did any ill
behavior, which hurt or killed a life, we would
be bound to get retribution some day. - All the religions hold this view?
- Who are we? Are the dog-killers to be blamed,
or the dog-owners and the policy makers?
15Premise
- As long as seeing love and respect as our
starting point, there will be no behavior of
hurting lives, but replace it with the love,
concern, protection, and the cherishing attitude
towards them. - As long as we have love and respect for the
living, we will not hurt lives. Instead, we will
cherish them, show them our love and even protect
them.
16Premise not hurt any kinds of lives?
- As long as we love the dogs we raise, we will
will not think of throwing them out under
whatever condition. Instead, we will love,
cherish and protect them. - Likewise, we should try to find a way to provide
the stray dogs on the street should be
commiserated.
17Vague expressions confusing terms
- Every person has his own daily life habits and
different likes and dislikes, which may cause the
other persons dissatisfactory and unhappiness,
but in love, you wont break up for these trifle
reasons. So, similarly, after marriage you find
that your husband has the habit of snoring, would
you divorce with him? I think the answer is no.
Therefore, the conclusion is that cohabitation as
trial marriage is unnecessary.
- Every person has his own daily life habits and
different likes and dislikes, which may cause the
other persons dissatisfactory and unhappiness,
but in love, you wont break up for these trifle
reasons. So, similarly, after marriage you find
that your husband has the habit of snoring, would
you divorce with him? I think the answer is no.
Therefore, the conclusion is that cohabitation as
trial marriage is unnecessary.
18Vague expressions confusing terms
- Understanding means understanding of ones
personality, interest, family background and
habits. We can know a person, his/her family
background and interest intimately through
heart-to-heart conversation and doing things
together. Even if this person means to hide
something from us, s/he will still reveal traces
of dishonestly if we are observant and patient
enough. - Only living habits need to be discovered through
living together. However, after stable
development of love relationship, if one loves a
person truly so that one is willing to marry
him/her, would s/he divorce the lover just
because the latter snores or is messy? The
answer, I think, is no. To cohabit as a trial
marriage, therefore, is unnecessary.
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20Suggestions
- Sufficient Research, but try to avoid faulty
inference from some statistics or singular cases.
- Take account of the possible premises and causes.
- Take account of the counter-arguments, give them
credits when necessary and then refute them. - Avoid confusion of terms.