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Year-End Motion Picture Project
  • Writing the script for your movie
  • Filming your movie
  • Editing your movie
  • Watching / Critiquing your movie
  • Xtra Credit will be awarded to the class winners
    from various categories (end of project after
    viewing/critiquing)
  • Awards will be given to best films from among all
    classes
  • Xtra Credit for Red Carpet Academy Awards
    Ceremony

DAY 1
2
Year-End Creative Project
  • All notes contained on this PowerPoint
    presentation, as well as some handouts provided
    were taken from David Trottiers The
    Screenwriters Bible (4th Edition). Should anyone
    wish to look through book throughout this
    project, please see me.

DAY 1
3
Todays Activity
  • Overview of Project (Individual Idea)
  • Coming up with a sample Idea/Premise for a movie
  • Creating a fictional central character
  • Central characters main opposition/conflict
  • Treatment

DAY 1
4
Movies A Whole Other Matter
  • Differentiate between novels (thoughts, feelings,
    internal concepts, themes) and scripts (almost
    exclusively verbal, visual, focusing on emotional
    aspects of scene)
  • Conflict in a stageplay comes out through the
    action dialogue
  • Showing through action usually works better than
    telling with dialogue

DAY 1
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Script Writing Structure is Important!!!
  • The script is a union of form (structure/ order)
    content (affective message)
  • Begin with a skeleton on which you hang the meat
    of your story
  • Break up movie according to Beginning (25),
    Middle (50), End (25)

DAY 1
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Script Writing Structure is Important!!!
Beginning Middle End
Set up story Grabs readers attention Complicate matters Conclude the story
Establish the situation for conflict Develop Conflict Resolve conflict
Catalyst Big Event (ends Act 1) Conflict rises to a Crisis The payoff for the audience
DAY 1
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Second Turning Point Crisis. Leads to Final
Showdown, forcing central character to take the
final action
Rising Conflict
Pinch Usually the moment toward the middle of
movie when character becomes more committed,
involved or motivated
Showdown Final face-off between character and
opposition
Realization when character and/or audience sees
that the character has changed
Middle Acts 2 3

First Turning Point The Big Event. Ends Act 1
moves reader to Act 2. Often it is the main
characters loss of control over his/her life
Catalyst One turning point early on that gives
main character goal, desire, mission, need, or
problem
Beginning Act 1
End Act 4 Denoue-ment Tie up loose ends
Hook reader from opening scene
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Brainstorming Activity
  • Writing a Treatment (your core story) in three
    paragraphs one for the beginning, one for the
    middle, and one for the end.
  • Two Sentences explaining your idea
  • Paragraph 1 will end with Big Event
  • Paragraph 2 will end with the Crisis
  • Paragraph 3 with the final outcome and
    Denouement
  • (Obviously you cannot include all characters)

DAY 1
9
CheckpointGet It Right From the Start
  • How solid is your idea, premise or concept?
  • Will it appeal to a mass audience?
  • Is it fresh? Original? Provocative? Commercial?
  • Does hearing it make people say, I want to see
    that!?
  • Is it large enough in scope to appear on the
    silver screen?
  • Does it stand alone without big stars?

DAY 1
10
Your Movie Concept
  • You should be able to tell a producer what your
    story is about in 1-2 sentences. You should be
    able to say
  • My story presents a character who wants
    (something) and who is opposed by (at least one
    other character). This opposition causes
    (conflict) and a (series of critical events), all
    leading to the (Crisis) and (Showdown) at the
    end.

DAY 1
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Todays Activity
  • Overview of Project
  • Group allocations
  • Discussion of individual ideas/premises
  • Choose one group idea/premise genre

DAY 2
12
Overview of Project
  • Choose a genre (action/adventure, Western,
    thriller, romantic comedy, sci-fi, family drama,
    etc)
  • First scene should hook your reader, setting
    forth the rules of your story (should convey
    atmosphere or mood, location, emotional setting
    and/or genre)
  • Early in the script, introduce your central
    character (protagonist) and his foil (antagonist)

DAY 2
13
The Flow of the Story
  • The Catalyst occurs early in your story (what
    happens to central character to give him/her a
    goal, desire, mission, need, problem. Kicks
    things out of balance and the main character
    spends the rest of the movie trying to get things
    back into balance.)
  • Catalyst often reveals something of the main
    conflict or story premise. It may raise the
    central dramatic question of the film.
  • Catalyst may or may not be the Big Event (for
    this assignment, it is not the same)

DAY 2
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The Flow of the Story
  • Warning! Dont provide too much information
    (background or exposition) in Act 1. Give only
    what the audience needs to understand the story
    without getting confused

DAY 2
15
The Flow of the Story
  • Act 1 (beginning) of story ends with Big Event
  • Central character emerges from Act 1 with desire
    to do something about the difficult situation
    created by Catalyst and/or Big Event
  • His/Her action will likely fail, forcing him/her
    to take new actions.
  • Act 2 will contain many setbacks and some
    breakthroughs or temporary triumphs
  • Middle focuses on this type of rising conflict
    and complication (avoid being too repetitive)

DAY 2
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The Flow of the Story
  • In the middle section of movie, part of the
    rising conflict can be strong subplots that
    crisscross with the main plot
  • The Pinch can be the moment when the motivation
    to achieve the goal becomes fully clear, or the
    stakes are raised
  • From the Pinch on, central character takes
    stronger actions, perhaps even desperate actions
    that threaten to compromise his/her values. One
    or more temporary triumphs by the central
    character arouse the opposition

DAY 2
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The Flow of the Story
  • As a storys conflict intensifies, the pace
    quickens until the worst thing happens (Crisis)
  • The Crisis is when all seems lost, or when the
    central character faces a crucial decision, or
    hits bottom. What is the worst thing that can
    happen to your character?
  • The Showdown or Climax follows on the heels of
    the Crisis (the central characters goal is on
    the line)

DAY 2
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The Flow of the Story
  • Hollywood loves happy endings, but the most
    effective and affective stories are bittersweet
    or tragic in the end
  • Dont end your movie with an easy solution it
    was all a dream or the central character does
    his own rescuing at the end
  • Dont leave end of story open or ambiguous (bring
    closure to your viewer) Exceptions, discuss
    with me!

DAY 2
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The Flow of the Story
  • The Realization occurs during or just after
    the films climactic scene, the central character
    realizing something new about him/herself after
    undergoing great challenges.
  • He/she has shown great courage- physical,
    emotional, and moral
  • The audiences discovery of the final result of
    the characters challenge is the moment of
    Realization

DAY 2
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The Flow of the Story
  • Finally, we have the Denouement where all
    loose ends are tied together and all remaining
    subplots are resolved
  • While stories deviate because writers purposely
    avoid formulaic writing, for this assignment,
    please observe the format provided (in that order)

DAY 2
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Other Things to Consider
  • You need a titillating title, one that conveys
    something about the concept or theme of your work
    (do this at the end of your project)
  • Your movie should strive to begin with a great,
    catchy and original idea
  • Every scene is a meaningful part of the whole

DAY 2
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Todays Activity
  • Overview of Project
  • Your Story
  • Types of Stories
  • Genre
  • Theme

DAY 3
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A Good Concept Begins With
  • Making it easily understood by an 8th grader
  • Can be encapsulated in a sentence or two
  • Provocative and big, fresh and highly marketable
    idea
  • Character plus conflict plus a hook (often the
    Big Event)
  • Sounds like an event movie with sequel
    potential
  • It can stand alone without great stars playing
    the parts
  • It will attract a big star
  • Unique with familiar elements

DAY 3
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A Good Concept Can
  • Be presented as a premise question
  • Hook or fail to hook an agent or producer
  • Present extraordinary happenings of someone who
    is ordinary, just like us
  • Have universal appeal

DAY 3
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Your Story
  • Central character has a conscious goal
  • He/she has an unconscious need (self-image,
    finding love, living a better life, etc)
  • The need is usually blocked by a character flaw
    (obvious to the audience)
  • The flaw is almost always selfishness, pride or
    greed

DAY 3
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Your Story
  • The flaw is explained in the backstory, some
    event in the past that deeply hurt the character
  • The characters conscious goal usually doesnt
    oppose the need, although it could

DAY 3
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Your Story2 Stories
  • There are 2 main stories Outside/Action
    Inside/Emotional
  • Each has its own turning points structure
  • One is the main plot, the other, a subplot
  • The 2 stories should be intertwined
    synergistically (see handout pg 35)

DAY 3
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Your Story
  • You will have to choose between 2 basic story
    types
  • Plot-Driven Character-Driven
  • Plot-Driven focuses on characters goal and the
    action
  • Character-Driven focuses on character dynamics, a
    need, key relationships

DAY 3
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Choose a Genre
  • Love stories
  • Action/adventure
  • Thriller
  • Horror
  • Sci-Fi
  • Detective/Mystery
  • Drama

DAY 3
30
ChecklistStory Must Knows
  • Identify the parameters of your story
  • What is the genre?
  • What is the time and setting?
  • What is the emotional atmosphere, and the mood?
  • What, if any, story or character limits exist?

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Plot-Driven Story
  • character achieves goal
  • Loses but gains valuable moral victory
  • Sows seeds of own destruction
  • Grows by doing the right thing
  • Grows up (coming of age/into his own) in quest
    for goal which is either achieved or not
  • Learns what he/she needs to be happy
  • Fails to ultimately learn lesson (but audience
    does)
  • Declines by striving to achieve a worthy goal
    (Godfather)

DAY 3
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Myth Beyond Genre Plot
  • The mythological heros journey is usually
    interweaved in the fabric of any story,
    regardless of genre
  • Hero lives in ordinary surroundings
  • Theres a call to adventure
  • Hero is reluctant to the call
  • Older person, amulet, or other aid changes his
    mind

DAY 3
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Myth Beyond Genre Plot
  • Hero travels to an extraordinary place
  • A series of tests or obstacles tests his/her
    heroic valor/determination
  • Hero often enters a secret/forbidden place
  • He/she seizes the object sought (magic lamp,
    treasure, etc)
  • Is chased back to the ordinary world where his
    deeds have blessed the people

DAY 3
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Theme
  • What would motivate you to write is the movie
    message or premise, sometimes called the theme.
  • Think of your storys moral (may know upfront or
    may develop through writing of script)

DAY 3
35
Todays Activity
  • Sketching your Central Character Others

DAY 4
36
10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  1. A goal and an opposition the central character
    must want something (specific and measurable
    happiness is not a goal). There must be
    opposition, which creates conflict. Conflict
    makes drama, reveals character, and motivates
    people to learn

DAY 4
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  1. Motivation central character should be
    motivated. The more personal the motivation, the
    better. Motivation usually grows with conflict
    as the story progresses. Usually motivation
    deepens at the Pinch.

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 3) Backstory Before page one of your screenplay,
    something significant happens to your central
    character. Most often we get brief glimpses of
    what happened (as flashbacks) and this backstory
    usually haunts the character, affecting his/her
    actions.

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 4) The Will to Act We judge a person not by
    their words but by their actions. Action reveals
    character, and crisis reveals his/her true
    colors, what he/she is made of. Action should
    reveal more than dialogue, although this too is
    action for it tells us what is going on inside.

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 5) A Point of View Attitudes Your character
    must have a past and a point of view about life
    based on his/her experiences (the backstory is
    just one event that shaped him/her). What is
    your characters point of view about life? Love?
    Opposite sex? Growing old? Sex? Falling rain?
    Grocery shopping? Career?

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 6) Room to Grow The central character also has a
    point of view of himself/ herself. This is
    his/her self-concept. He/she acts from this point
    of view. Growth comes about through adversity
    and conflict, where his/her true character is
    revealed

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 7) Believability Your role as the writer is to
    make us care about your character and make
    him/her as real as possible, resembling real-life
    human beings with emotions. In finding his/her
    human traits, seek to give 1 dominant trait,
    along with 3-4 other traits to contrast against
    their main flaw.

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 7) Continued
  • You dont have to reveal these at one time.
    Ideally, each scene, each contact with a
    different character reveals something new. Give
    character human values, human dimension

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 8) Details these mean a lot. Think of them as
    characterization tools. Idiosyncrasies, habits,
    quirks, imperfections, etc. Personal expressions
    true to the character.

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 9) A Writer Who Cares Character should have a
    life and voice of his own. Let your characters
    take over the story and tell you what they want
    you to do. Investigate a particular background to
    make character more realistic. Even though is
    important, you must see the character in detail.
    Identify complexes, phobias, pet peeves, fears,
    secrets, attitudes, beliefs, etc.

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 9) Continued
  • What are my characters values?
  • What does he/she do when alone?
  • Whats the most traumatic thing that ever
    happened to him/her?
  • Whats his/her biggest secret?
  • What is her most poignant moment?
  • What are his/her hobbies?
  • What are his/her special abilities?

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 9) Continued
  • What is his/her deepest fear?
  • What kind of car does he/she drive?
  • How does he/she dress?
  • Where does he/she live?
  • Whats the worst thing that can happen to
    him/her?
  • Whats the best thing?
  • What is he/she doing tonight?

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 10) Strong Supporting Cast Well-written stories
    emphasize relationship (opposite personalities is
    one type where each fills anothers need and
    transform the other). Your cast should include
    one central character, a confidant/sidekick, a
    love interest (may also function in another role
    as well). You will want characters with contrasts
    on many levels (attitudes, methods, social
    status, etc).

DAY 3
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10 Keys to Creating Captivating Characters
  • 10) Strong Supporting Cast Well-written stories
    emphasize relationship (opposite personalities is
    one type where each fills anothers need and
    transform the other). Your cast should include
    one central character, a confidant/sidekick, a
    love interest (may also function in another role
    as well). You will want characters with contrasts
    on many levels (attitudes, methods, social
    status, etc).

DAY 3
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Todays Activity
  • Dialogue Scene
  • Outlining your Acts/Scenes

DAY 4
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Dialogue, Subtext Exposition
  • In movies, dialogue is not real-life speech (even
    if it sounds like it).
  • Dialogue in movies is more focused, less rambling
    (edited speech).
  • Avoid monologues. Dialogue is conversational.
  • Characters should interrupt, lie to another.
  • Let your characters speak in a voice of their own

DAY 4
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Dialogue, Subtext Exposition
  • Voice in Dialogue consists of
  • The text, or words
  • The subtext, or meaning of words
  • Grammar and syntax
  • Vocabulary
  • Accent and/or regional or foreign influence
  • Slang
  • Professional Jargon
  • Speaking style, including rhythm and sentence
    length

DAY 4
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Dialogue, Subtext Exposition
  • Dialogue (what is said) is not as important as
    the subtext (how it is said).
  • Dialogue should move the story forward, just as
    scenes do, revealing something about the
    characters attitudes perceptions, traits, values
  • Every dialogue scene should include some
    conflict, even if it is just passive resistance

DAY 4
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Dialogue, Subtext Exposition
  • Another purpose of dialogue is to communicate
    necessary facts and background info on story
    (exposition)
  • Most of the exposition comes out in the beginning
    of the story (only give what is needed for
    audience to understand story)
  • When using flashbacks to provide exposition, do
    it only if it will move the story forward

DAY 4
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How to Make a Scene
  • Screenplays are composed of acts
  • Acts break down into sequences
  • Sequences into scenes
  • Scenes into beats

DAY 4
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How to Make a Scene
  • Each scene should move story forward in terms of
    plot and character (current scene motivated by
    prior scene will motivate the next)
  • All scenes should direct us to the Showdown, the
    biggest scene or sequence of scenes
  • Never tell what you can show

DAY 4
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How to Make a Scene
  • Avoid talking heads (ex an argument can be start
    at the breakfast table, continued in the car,
    concluding at a racquetball court)
  • Every scene needs a beginning, middle, and end
  • Start scene as close to the end of the scene as
    possible
  • Cut out from each scene what isnt essential to
    moving plot forward

DAY 4
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How to Make a Scene
  • Pace your scenes Follow action scenes with
    dialogue scenes, heavy scenes with light scenes
  • Make sure pace quickens as you close on the
    Crisis and Showdown
  • Scenes should culminate in something dramatic, a
    punch or tension that leads to another scene
    (decision, reversal, cliffhanger, revelation or
    other event that makes us want to see whats
    going to happen next)

DAY 4
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How to Make a Scene
  • Strive to create effective transitions between
    scenes (has nothing to do with editing)
  • End one scene with a roulette wheel spinning. The
    next scene begins with a car wheel digging into
    the mud.
  • Each scene should contain a definite emotion or
    mood. Focus on that emotion as you craft the
    scene. What is my characters attitude/intention
    in this scene?

DAY 4
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How to Make a Scene
  • Focus the scene on a well-motivated conflict
    (regardless of how minor, even two people with
    the same goal will disagree over methods, or just
    get under the others skin)
  • Each scene should have a definite purpose

DAY 4
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Tools for Building Suspense
  • Evoke emotion create characters we like
    (believable) since they act as conduits through
    which emotion can pass to us
  • Create conflict rising conflict creates
    suspense. Since conflict is drama, school fights
    are so fascinating and no one breaks them up
  • Provide main character with powerful opposition
    a position of strength, capable of doing damage
    (not just physical)

DAY 4
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Tools for Building Suspense
  • Build expectation for trouble (unfaithful husband
    coming home to find his wife answering the phone
    call of his lover)
  • Increase tension put audience in superior
    position (dramatic irony contrast between what
    actors know and what audience knows)
  • Use surprise throw in an occasional nasty twist,
    or sudden turn of events

DAY 4
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Tools for Building Suspense
  • Create immediacy when something vital is at
    stake, that something becomes vital (physical
    safety, emotional fulfillment, the next or
    ultimate goal of main character, etc)
  • Establish consequences Heightened suspense can
    follow as the character attempts once again the
    task that nearly killed him/her last time

DAY 4
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Todays Activity
  • Story Skeleton break up your story into Acts
    Scenes
  • Begin to fill in the meat action dialogue

DAY 5
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SCRIPT WRITING FORMAT!
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Script Writing Format
  • There are 3 parts of a screenplay
  • Headings
  • Narrative description
  • Dialogue

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Script Writing Format
  • There are 3 types of headings
  • Master scene headings (camera location, scene
    location, time)
  • Secondary scene headings (when breaking up long
    scenes that take place in the same location to
    direct camera)
  • Other secondary headings are for flashbacks,
    dreams, montages, series of shots, and so on

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Script Writing Format
  • For entire script, use Courier New 12-point font.
  • Use 1 margins (except for left side 1.25)
  • Page numbers appear on upper-right corner (insert
    as header). No page number should appear on title
    page.
  • Begin with title page (see sample). List all
    group members. On address line (right-justified),
    type
  • Mrs. Contreras Period
  • 2005-2006 School Year
  • G. Holmes Braddock Senior High
  • 3601 SW 147 Avenue
  • Miami, Fl 33185

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Script Writing Format
  • A FADE IN always appears at the beginning of
    a script (flush to the left margin).
  • B Master Scene Heading
  • camera location (INT for interior or EXT for
    exterior)
  • scene location (where everything is happening.
    Usually 1 to 2 words suffice)
  • time of day (DAY or NIGHT or SAME if next
    scene occurs at same time as prior, LATER)
  • special notations (dream, year, flashback,
    etc.)

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Script Writing Format
  • C Spacing between scenes (2 spaces before a
    new master scene heading)
  • D Montage and Series of Shots (a sequence of
    brief shots expressing the same or similar idea,
    such as passage of time, stream of
    consciousness (the characters thoughts)). This
    format works for flashbacks and dreams as well.

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Script Writing Format
  • E INSERT (also known as CUTAWAY) is used to
    bring something small into full frame (book, news
    headline, sign, contract, letter, etc). You use
    this function when it is important to draw
    attention to the item.

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Script Writing Format
  • Samples
  • MONTAGE SUZY AND BILL HAVE FUN TOGETHER
  • SERIES OF SHOTS JOHN GETS EVEN
  • FLASHBACK EXT. TRAIN TRACKS NIGHT
  • DREAM SID IN THE JUNGLE
  • DAME NOSTRAS VISION WORLD WAR FIVE
  • INSERT THE LETTER
  • INTERCUT TELEPHONE CONVERSATION

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Script Writing Format
  • F ESTABLISHING SHOT (often at the beginning of
    the movie, sequence or scene)
  • Incorrect
  • EXT.NEW YORK CITY DAY ESTABLISHING
  • Correct
  • EXT. NEW YORK CITY DAY
  • Manhattan sparkles in the sunlight.

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Script Writing Format
  • G CAMERA PLACEMENT (beginning with B, the
    camera is inside the classroom, but it can see
    the little girl in pigtails through the window)
  • Narrative description is written in present
    tense because we view a film in present time.
    Limit your paragraphs to four lines. Describe
    only what can be seen or heard.

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Script Writing Format
  • I CHARACTER FIRST APPEARANCE (must be
    capitalized)
  • K SIGNS, NEWS HEADLINES, BOOK TITLES, NOTES
    LETTERS
  • L SOUNDS
  • MOS means without sound, such as two lovers
    flirting MOS in the balcony.

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Script Writing Format
  • M SPECIAL EFFECTS
  • SUPERS means to superimpose words on a screen,
    such as FIVE YEARS LATER
  • N TRANSITIONS
  • O POV means point of view which is to see
    something from a characters point of view.

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Script Writing Format
  • P AUTHORS INTRUSION this is only permissible
    if it helps tell the story or clarifies
    something.
  • Q CONTINUED when a scene does not conclude at
    the bottom of a given page, it is customary to
    double-space and type (CONTINUED) at the lower
    right (flushed right).
  • R CHARACTER CUE the character name or cue
    always appears in CAPS.
  • ACTORS DIRECTION just under name, parenthetical
    directions aid the actor/actress to better play
    part.

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Script Writing Format
  • BEAT usually signals a pause the actor/actress
    should take.
  • SOLILOQUIES avoid characters talking to
    themselves, unless absolutely necessary.
  • S CONTINUING AND CONTD No need to use this in
    scripts. The only time you should do this is if
    youre continuing characters dialogue from
    previous page. Type (MORE) at the bottom of
    first page and BUGSY (CONTD) at the top of the
    next page.

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Script Writing Format
  • P AUTHORS INTRUSION this is only permissible
    if it helps tell the story or clarifies
    something.
  • Q CONTINUED when a scene does not conclude at
    the bottom of a given page, it is customary to
    double-space and type (CONTINUED) at the lower
    right (flushed right).
  • R CHARACTER CUE the character name or cue
    always appears in CAPS.
  • ACTORS DIRECTION just under name, parenthetical
    directions aid the actor/actress to better play
    part.

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Script Writing Format
  • BEAT usually signals a pause the actor/actress
    should take.
  • SOLILOQUIES avoid characters talking to
    themselves, unless absolutely necessary.
  • S CONTINUING AND CONTD No need to use this in
    scripts. The only time you should do this is if
    youre continuing characters dialogue from
    previous page. Type (MORE) at the bottom of
    first page and BUGSY (CONTD) at the top of the
    next page.

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Script Writing Format
  • T OFF SCREEN (O.S.) and VOICE OVER (V.O.) This
    is a feature used when a character is heard but
    not seen in the camera frame. Voice over is
    typically used when a character is having a
    thought but his/her lips dont move.
  • U TELEPHONE VOICE Voices coming through
    telephones, walkie-talkies, radios, etc. are
    VOICE OVERS.

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Script Writing Format
  • V TELEPHONE CONVERSATIONS
  • Method 1 dialogue from the second party (off
    screen) is not heard. We deduce what is happening
    from 1st persons conversation.
  • Method 2 VOICE OVER is implemented and we hear
    the second voice.
  • Method 3 Audience sees and hears both parties
    (split screens)

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Script Writing Format
  • V TELEPHONE CONVERSATIONS
  • Method 3 B Use INTERCUT feature to list the
    entire dialogue scheme, rather than use master
    scene headings for each characters exchange.
  • MUTE DIALOGUE Signing is not considered
    dialogue since words are not actually spoken.
    When this occurs in a film, the words must be
    spoken orally or through subtitles.

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Script Writing Format
  • W DIALOGUE PUNCTUATION
  • Dashes (--) indicate sudden shift or break in
    thought, or to show emphasis.
  • Ellipsis () is used for continuity. The
    character will start speaking, then pause, and
    then continue again.

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Check Yourself
  • What is the catalyst that disturbs the normality
    of your characters life, giving your central
    character a direction?
  • What Big Event really impacts your characters
    life?
  • Is there a strong, rising, conflict throughout
    Act 2?
  • Does the conflict build? Or just become
    repetitive?

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Check Yourself
  • Is there a Pinch, a twist in the middle, that
    divides Act 2 Act 3, where your character is
    more fully motivated/ committed and cannot return
    to who he/she was before?
  • What terrible Crisis will your character face?
  • Will the Crisis force a life/death decision,
    and/or make the audience fret about how things
    will turn out in the end?

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Check Yourself
  • What is the Showdown?
  • How does your story end?
  • In the end, does your character learn something
    new? Is his/her growth (positive/negative) made
    apparent? Or does he/she receive recognition in
    the end or is his/her own growth recognition
    enough?

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Last Check
  • Do you have a movie title that inspires you?
  • Will this title titillate the audience? Is it a
    grabber?
  • Does it convey something of your story concept or
    theme?
  • Does it conjure up an image or an emotion?
  • Is it short enough to appear on a marquee?

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Last Check
  • How will your movie poster look?
  • How will your movie trailer look?
  • Is there a striking visual image that will stop a
    passerby?
  • Is there a headline that plays off the title or
    conveys a high concept?
  • Will people want to see this movie?

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Group Roles
  • While some members will have to assume various
    duties, the group should assign a member to one
    or more of the following categories
  • Director (involved in all filming, oversees
    entire project, knows whats happening at all
    times)
  • Production Assistant (involved in all filming,
    assists Director, knows whats happening at all
    times)
  • Cinematographer / Editor (involved in all
    filming, film footage (beginning to end) is
    his/her main responsibility)
  • Equipment, Wardrobe, Props Script Assistant
    (involved in all filming, makes sure that all is
    available when needed, closely follows script to
    ensure consistency/notes alterations)
  • Actors/Actresses (involved in the actual filming
    of the movie and 2005-2006 Bulldog Academy Awards)

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Extra Credit
  • Bulldog Academy Awards Show
  • - director
  • - production assistant
  • - cinematographers (2 cameras)
  • - editors (2)
  • - music technician/lighting assistant
  • - video screen assistant Bring screen down to
    play red carpet interviews, pre-recorded
    commercials, or category winners. Take up for
    live dance numbers/acts, singing, etc.
  • - Red Carpet interviews (stars interviewers)
  • - Pre-Recorded commercials (sponsors)
  • - Show Host/Hostess
  • - Category Announcers

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Group Book Requirements
  • Clear Cover Binder (any color)
  • Front inside clear cover (movie Poster)
  • Side 2006-2007 Motion Picture Project
  • Back inside clear cover (list of credits)
  • Inside
  • - script
  • - treatment
  • - wardrobe/prop/equipment list
  • - camera diagrams
  • - location/shooting schedule
  • - group reflections

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Movie Project (Script-Writing)
  • Week of 10/9/06 Brainstorm movie
    concept/premise. Movie Project approval letter
    signature. Read PP slide show for movie project
  • Week of 10/23/06 Write up Movie Concept (2
    sentences), Core Story Elements, plot these into
    8 ½ x 14 flowchart, Group Allocation. Character
    development, story development begin outlining
    (Acts/Scenes), Dialogue Action
  • Week of 10/30/06 Discuss characters
    development, backstories and interweaving into
    main story (flowchart). Type up Movie Concept,
    Story Elements 8 ½ x 14 flowchart making any
    necessary corrections.
  • Week of 11/6/06 After completing information on
    characters, discuss how the characters are to be
    developed throughout the movie (how are they to
    grow or not grow in the story, interact with
    other characters). Amend the typed 8 ½ x 14
    flowchart as needed (email to all group members).

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Movie Project (Script-Writing)
  • Week of 11/13/06 Using typed 8 ½ x 14 flowchart,
    begin to write into detailed 8 ½ x 11 sheets
    (they say Acts I-IV on the side). At the
    beginning of each scene, write the purpose for
    that scene at the top (one sentence). Each scene
    must have a beginning, middle, end and should
    serve to advance the plot in some way (where
    action or interaction of characters provides not
    just characterization - getting to know the
    backstories, motivations, thoughts/perceptions
    and behaviors of characters but is the action
    that keeps the story moving forward). Be as
    thorough as possible in terms of writing on 8 ½ x
    11 sheet what is to take place in that particular
    scene from beginning to end (obviously include
    dialogue between characters). Review Script
    Writing Format (on PP handout), begin to type
    script based on your notes from Act(s)/Scene(s)
    handout. Once you have checked for spelling and
    format, print your script section(s). Once
    printed, next to each Master Scene Heading, write
    out (in pencil) the Act/Scene number as it
    corresponds to groups 8 ½ x 14 flowchart.
    Staple your sections and write your name at the
    top-right corner of top page.
  • Week of 11/20/06 Groups will read make
    corrections to individual scripts
  • Week of 11/27/06 Groups will read make
    corrections to individual scripts. Decide on
    preliminary shooting schedules (subject to
    parental approval)
  • Week of 12/4/06 Movie book due (typed Movie
    Concept, Core Story Elements, Characters,
    Acts/Scenes written sheets, Script, preliminary
    shooting schedule)

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Movie Project (Filming Schedule)
  • Week of 12/11 (Each group bring video camera
    all wiring for inspection).
  • Week of 12/18
  • Week of 12/25 (Holidays optional)
  • Week of 1/1(Holidays optional)
  • Week of 1/8
  • Week of 1/15
  • Week of 1/22
  • Week of 1/29
  • Week of 2/5
  • Week of 2/12
  • Week of 2/19
  • Week of 2/26
  • Week of 3/5
  • Week of 3/12

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Movie Project (Editing Schedule)
  • Week of 3/19 Film Editing Training K215 (Monday
    only). Editing Mon-Thur 300pm-600pm.
  • Week of 3/26 Editing Mon-Thur 300pm-600pm.
  • Week of 4/2 (Spring Break)
  • Week of 4/9 Editing Mon-Thur 300pm-600pm.
  • Week of 4/16 Editing Mon-Thur 300pm-600pm.
    Film Project Due by end of day Thursday, 4/19.
  • Week of 4/23 Movie Opening Nights
  • Week of 4/30 Rehearsals for Academy Awards Red
    Carpet Filming
  • Week of 5/7 Bulldog Academy Awards

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Movie Show Times
  • Monday, 4/23
  • Premiere Showing of Period 1 movies
  • Auditorium 300pm (no food/drink)
  • Tuesday, 4/24
  • Premiere Showing of Periods 3 movies
  • Auditorium 300pm (no food/drink)
  • Wednesday, 4/25
  • Premier Showing of Periods 4 movies
  • Auditorium 300pm (no food/drink)
  • Thursday, 4/26
  • Premiere Showing of Periods 5 movies
  • Auditorium 300pm (no food/drink)
  • Friday, 4/27
  • Premier Showing of Periods 6 movies
  • Auditorium 300pm (no food/drink)

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Bulldog Academy Awards
  • Thursday, 5/3
  • If you wish to make a Red Carpet appearance to
    be shown during the Bulldog Academy Awards
    Ceremony, you must dress up as either a movie
    star (actors/actresses), fans (non-actors
    friends), or interviewers (pre-approved). Meet by
    Circular Driveway (330pm).
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