Title: Literature Review and Referencing
1Literature Review and Referencing
- Gerry S. Doroja, MSCS
- Associate Professor
- Department of Computer Science
- Xavier University - Ateneo de Cagayan
- gsd_at_xu.edu.ph
- August 17, 2004
Adapted from Writing up research online,
Language Center, Asian Institute of Technology,
Bangkok, Thailand, 2003 (http//www.languages.ait.
ac.th/EL21OPEN.HTM)
2Literature Review
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4What is the typical research lifecycle?
Definition (1)
Initial Solutions (2)
Technology Transfer (6)
Exploratory theory
Space of Possible Solutions (5)
Evaluation of Initial Solutions (3)
Tradeoff
Comparison of Solutions (4)
5What is the typical research lifecycle?
- (1) Definition THE PROBLEM - Research defines a
new problem, new constraints, new opportunity, or
a new approach. - (2) Initial Solutions CREATE UNITS - Initial
algorithms, designs, theorems, programs are
developed. - (3) Evaluation of Initial Solutions EVALUATE
UNITS - Initial solutions are evaluated and
refined in isolation. - (4) Comparison of Solutions COMPARE UNITS -
Solutions are compared to one another and also to
ideal solutions. - (5) Space of Possible Solutions SPACE OF UNITS
IDEAL MODEL - Theorems are proved about the
limits on any solutions. Existing solutions are
placed in a common framework to determine whether
all possible solutions have been found.
(including exploratory theory and tradeoff) - (6) Technology Transfer Best approaches are
transferred to users.
6Research Project Phases, Research Methods the
Literature Review
Research Methods
Research Phase-Method Matrix
Research Phases
7What is the literature?
- the works you consulted in order to understand
and investigate your research problem - NOT novels and poetry (as the usual
interpretation of the word literature)
8What are the sources for the literature review?
- Journal articles
- Books
- Conference proceedings
- Government and corporate reports
- Newspapers
- Theses and dissertations
- Internet (electronic journals)
- CD-ROM
- Magazines
How useful are the above sources?
9Journal articles
- good especially for up-to-date information
- can take up to two years to publish articles
- offer a relatively concise, up-to-date format for
research and, - reputable journals are refereed (i.e. editors
publish only the most relevant and reliable
research).
10Books
- less up-to-date as it takes longer for a book to
be published than for a journal article ( i.e.,
five years) - textbooks not very useful in your literature
review as they are intended for teaching, not for
research however, - textbooks do offer a good starting point from
which to find more detailed sources.
11Conference proceedings
- useful in providing the latest research, or
research that has not been published - also helpful in providing information on which
people are currently involved in which research
areas thus, - can be helpful in tracking down other work by the
same researchers.
12Government/corporate reports
- (many) government departments and corporations
commission or carry out research and - their published findings can provide a useful
source of information, depending on your field of
study.
13Newspapers
- generally intended for a general (not
specialized) audience - information they provide will be of very limited
use for the literature review - more helpful as providers of information about
recent trends, discoveries or changes, e.g.
announcing changes in government policy but, - you should then search for more detailed
information in other sources
14Theses and dissertations
- can be useful sources of information
- disadvantages
- 1) they can be difficult to obtain since they are
not published, but are generally only available
from the library shelf or through interlibrary
loan and, - 2) the student who carried out the research may
not be an experienced researcher and therefore
you might have to treat their findings with more
caution than published research.
15Internet
- fastest-growing source of information
- impossible to characterize the information
available - some hints about using electronic sources
- 1) bear in mind that anyone can post information
on the Internet so the quality may not be
reliable - 2) the information you find may be intended for a
general audience and so not be suitable for
inclusion in your literature review (information
for a general audience is usually less detailed)
and, - 3) more and more refereed electronic journals
(e-journals) are appearing on the Internet - if
they are refereed it means that there is an
editorial board that evaluates the work before
publishing it in their e-journal, so the quality
should be more reliable (depending on the
reputation of the journal).
16CD-ROMS
- few CR-ROMs provide the kind of specialized,
detailed information about academic research that
you need for your own research since most are
intended for a general audience. - However, more and more bibliographies are being
put onto CD-ROM for use in academic libraries, so
they can be a very valuable tool in searching for
the information you need.
17Magazines
- intended for a general audience (e.g. Time) are
unlikely to be useful in providing the sort of
information you need. - specialized magazines may be more useful (for
example computer magazines for computer science
students) but usually magazines are not useful
for your research except as a starting point by
providing news or general information about new
discoveries, policies, etc. that you can further
research in more specialized sources.
18Why write a literature review?
- To provide a critical look at the existing
research that is significant to the work that you
are carrying out - Some people think that it is a summary this is
not true. - Although you need to summarize relevant research,
it is also vital that you - 1. evaluate this work,
- 2. show the relationships between different work,
and - 3. show how it relates to your work.
19Why write a literature review?
- You cannot simply give a concise description of,
for example, an article you need to - 1. Select what parts of the research to discuss
(e.g. the methodology), - 2. Show how it relates to the other work (e.g.
What other methodologies have been used? How are
they similar? How are they different?) and, - 3. Show how it relates to your work (what is its
relationship to your methodology?).
20Why write a literature review?
- The literature review should provide the context
for your research by looking at what work has
already been done in your research area. - It is not supposed to be just a summary of other
people's work!
21Here are some of the questions your literature
review should answer
- 1. What do we already know in the immediate area
concerned? (SUMMARY) - 2. What are the characteristics of the key
concepts or the main factors or variables? - 3. What are the relationships between these key
concepts, factors or variables? - 4. What are the existing theories?
- 5. Where are the inconsistencies or other
shortcomings in our knowledge and understanding? - 6. What views need to be (further) tested?
- 7. What evidence is lacking, inconclusive,
contradictory or too limited? - 8. Why study (further) the research problem?
- 9. What contribution can the present study be
expected to make? - 10. What research designs or methods seem
unsatisfactory?
22Writing your own literature review
- easy to write a bad literature review
- difficult to write a good one
23Example of a bad literature review
- Until recently many researchers have shown
interest in the field of coastal erosion and the
resulting beach profiles. They have carried out
numerous laboratory experiments and field
observations to illuminate the darkness of this
field. Their findings and suggestions are
reviewed here. - JACHOWSKI (1964) developed a model investigation
conducted on the interlocking precast concrete
block seawall. After a result of a survey of
damages caused by the severe storm at the coast
of USA, a new and especially shaped concrete
block was developed for use in shore protection.
This block was designed to be used in a revetment
type seawall that would be both durable and
economical as well as reduce wave run-up and
overtopping, and scour at its base or toe. It was
proved that effective shore protection could be
designed utilizing these units. - HOM-MA and HORIKAWA (1964) studied waves forces
acting on the seawall which was located inside
the surf zone. On the basis of the experimental
results conducted to measure waves forces against
a vertical wall, the authors proposed an
empirical formula of wave pressure distribution
on a seawall. The computed results obtained by
using the above formula were compared well with
the field data of wave pressure on a vertical
wall. - SELEZOV and ZHELEZNYAK (1965) conducted
experiments on scour of sea bottom in front of
harbor seawalls, basing on the theoretical
investigation of solitary wave interaction with a
vertical wall using Boussinesque type equation.
It showed that the numerical results were in
reasonable agreement with laboratory experimental
data. - and so on.
24Which of the questions does this literature
review answer?
- The literature review offers a summary of
previous research, so it answers question 1. - It simply tells the reader what was discovered in
previous research.
25Which of them it did not answer?
- This literature review did not answer any of the
questions from 2 to 10. - It doesn't evaluate the research it summarizes,
nor does it show the relationships between the
different theories, views and approaches it
describes.
26Which method has the writer used to organize the
literature review?
- The writer has organized this literature review
around the researchers, and has presented it
chronologically (arranging the work by when it
was published). - Notice that by organizing it around the
researchers (the summaries are listed after the
names of the people who did the research) and not
around the research (e.g. around key concepts)
the writer emphasizes the people and not their
work.
27Is it a good literature review? Why?
- Not a good literature review
- Only gives a summary of previous research but it
does not use the literature to explain more about
the writer's own research problem - Not critical did not emphasize which theories or
findings are important, which are inconclusive,
what the shortcomings are, etc.
28Is it a good literature review? Why?
- does not show how previous research relates to
the writer's own research problem, or the
relationship between different research already
carried out. - the organization is not effective for showing
relationships, drawing comparisons, or making
evaluations.
29How to write a good literature review?
- Remember the purpose it should answer the
questions mentioned earlier. - Look at how published writers review the
literature. - You'll see that you should use the literature to
explain your research - after all, you are not
writing a literature review just to tell your
reader what other researchers have done. - Your aim should be to show why your research
needs to be carried out, how you came to choose
certain methodologies or theories to work with,
how your work adds to the research already
carried out, etc.
30How to write a good literature review?
- Read with a purpose you need to summarize the
work you read but you must also decide which
ideas or information are important to your
research (so you can emphasize them), and which
are less important and can be covered briefly or
left out of your review. - You should also look for the major concepts,
conclusions, theories, arguments etc. that
underlie the work, and look for similarities and
differences with closely related work. - This is difficult when you first start reading,
but should become easier the more you read in
your area.
31How to write a good literature review?
- Write with a purpose your aim should be to
evaluate and show relationships between the work
already done (Is Researcher Y's theory more
convincing than Researcher X's? Did Researcher X
build on the work of Researcher Y?) and between
this work and your own. - In order to do this effectively you should
carefully plan how you are going to organize your
work.
32How to write a good literature review?
- A lot of people like to organize their work
chronologically (using time as their organizing
system). - Unless developments over time are crucial to
explain the context of your research problem,
using a chronological system will not be an
effective way to organize your work. - Some people choose to organize their work
alphabetically by author name this system will
not allow you to show the relationships between
the work of different researchers, and your work,
and should be avoided!
33How to write a good literature review?
- When you read for your literature review, you are
actually doing two things at the same time (which
makes things more difficult for you!) - you are trying to define your research problem
finding a gap, asking a question, continuing
previous research, counter-claiming - you are trying to read every source relevant to
your research problem. - Naturally, until you have defined your problem,
you will find that there are hundreds of sources
that seem relevant. - However, you cannot define your problem until you
read around your research area. - This seems a vicious circle, but what should
happen is that as you read you define your
problem, and as you define your problem you will
more easily be able to decide what to read and
what to ignore.
34Some traps to avoid
- Trying to read everything!
- As you might already have discovered, if you try
to be comprehensive you will never be able to
finish the reading! - The idea of the literature review is not to
provide a summary of all the published work that
relates to your research, but a survey of the
most relevant and significant work.
35Some traps to avoid
- Reading but not writing!
- It's easier to read than to write given the
choice, most of us would rather sit down with a
cup of coffee and read yet another article
instead of putting ourselves in front of the
computer to write about what we have already
read! - Writing takes much more effort, doesn't it?
- However, writing can help you to understand and
find relationships between the work you've read,
so don't put writing off until you've "finished"
reading - after all, you will probably still be
doing some reading all the way through to the end
of your research project. - Also, don't think of what you first write as
being the final or near-final version. - Writing is a way of thinking, so allow yourself
to write as many drafts as you need, changing
your ideas and information as you learn more
about the context of your research problem.
36Some traps to avoid
- Not keeping bibliographic information!
- The moment will come when you have to write your
references page . . . and then you realize you
have forgotten to keep the information you need,
and that you never got around to putting
references into your work. - The only solution is to spend a lot of time in
the library tracking down all those sources that
you read, and going through your writing to find
which information came from which source. - If you're lucky, maybe you can actually do this
before your defence - more likely, you will
unable to find all your sources, a big headache
for you and your committee. - To avoid this nightmare, always keep this
information in your notes. - Always put REFERENCES into your writing.
37Literature Review A (Good) Example
- Roll, Y., M.J. Rosenblatt and D. Kadosh. On the
optimal container size in automated warehouses,
Proceedings of the Ninth ICPR. - Automated storage and retrieval systems (AS/RS)
are being introduced into the industry and
warehousing at an increasing rate. Forecasts
indicate that this trend will continue for the
foreseeable future (see 1). Research in the
area of AS/RS has followed several avenues.
Early work by Hausman, Schwarz and Graves 6, 7
was concerned with storage assignment and
interleaving policies, based on turnover rates of
the various items. Elsayed 3 and Elsayed and
Stern 4 compared algorithms for handling orders
in AR/RS. Additional work by Karasawa et al. 9,
Azadivar 2 and Parry et al. 11 deals with the
design of an AS/RS and the determination of its
throughput by simulation and optimization
techniques. - Several researchers addressed the problem of the
optimal handling unit (pallet or container) size,
to be used in material handling and warehousing
systems. Steudell 13, Tanchoco and Agee14,
Tanchoco et al. 15 and Grasso and Tanchoco 5
studied various aspects of this subject. The last
two references incorporate the size of the
pallet, or unit load, in evaluation of the
optimal lot sizes for multi-inventory systems
with limited storage space. In a report on a
specific case, Normandin 10 has demonstrated
that using the 'best-size' container can result
in considerable savings. A simulation model
combining container size and warehouse capacity
considerations, in an AS/RS environment, was
developed by Kadosh 8. The general results,
reflecting the stochastic nature of the flow of
goods, are similar to those reported by
Rosenblatt and Roll 12. Nevertheless, container
size was found to affect strongly overall
warehousing costs. - In this paper, we present an analytical framework
for approximating the optimal size of a warehouse
container. The approximation is based on series
of generalizations and specific assumptions.
However, these are valid for a wide range of
real life situations. The underlying assumptions
of the model are presented in the following
section.
38Notice how the writers have
- Grouped similar information "Steudell 13,
Tanchoco and Agee14, Tanchoco et al. 15 and
Grasso and Tanchoco 5 studied various aspects
of this subject." - Shown the relationship between the work of
different researchers, showing similarities/differ
ences "The general results, reflecting the
stochastic nature of the flow of goods, are
similar to those reported by Rosenblatt and Roll
12." - Indicated the position of the work in the
research area history "Early work by Hausman,
Schwarz and Graves 6, 7 . . . " - Moved from a general discussion of the research
in AS/RS to the more specific area (optimal
container size) that they themselves are
researching i.e. they relate previous work to
their own to define it, justify it and explain it.
39Here is an outline of the same piece of writing
- On the optimal container size in automated
warehouses by Y. Roll, M.J. Rosenblatt and D.
Kadosh, in Proceedings of the Ninth ICPR - 1. Forecasts of increasing rate of AR/RS
introduction 1 - 2. Storage assignment/interleaving policies
(Hausman, Schwarz, Graves 6,7) - 3. Comparison of algorithms for handling orders
(Elsayed 3, Elsayed Stern 4) - 4. Design of AS/RS determination of throughput
(Karasawa et al. 9, Azadivar 2, Parry et al.
11) - 5. Optimal handling unit (Steudel 13, Tanchoco
Agee 14) - a. with pallet size/unit load (Tanchoco et
al. 15, Grasso Tanchoco 5) - b. best-size gives savings (Normandin 10)
- c. simulation model (Kadosh 8)
- d. stochastic flow (Kadosh 8, Rosenblatt
and Roll 12) - 6. Summary of previous research container size
was found to affect strongly overall warehousing
costs. - 7. Present research an analytical framework for
approximating the optimal size of a warehouse
container. - From this outline, it is clear that the writers
are organizing their information around ideas (in
this case research) not around the researchers.
This enables them to focus on the research
itself, to show how different research is
related, and how it all relates to their own
research.
40Referencing
41What is referencing?
- Referencing (also called citing or documenting)
your sources means systematically showing what
information or ideas you are quoting or
paraphrasing, and where they come from. - You are entitled to use someone else's words,
ideas or information in your work - and in fact
you have to do so - but you must show that they
are not your own by indicating their source.
42What is referencing?
- Referencing systems vary between different fields
of study and between different journals or
publishers within a field of study. - Despite this variation, all referencing systems
have the same basic components - an in-text reference to show that a piece of
information, idea, quotation, etc. you have
included in your writing belongs to another
writer. It is always designed to be short because
it is interrupting the text, and is usually in
parentheses
43What is referencing?
- Example
- In recent years, there has been a rapid increase
in car sales in Thailand (Honda 1995). ORIn
recent years, there has been a rapid increase in
car sales in Thailand (Honda, 1995). ORIn
recent years, there has been a rapid increase in
car sales in Thailand (Honda 135).ORIn recent
years there has been a rapid increase in car
sales in Thailand 1.ORIn recent years there
has been a rapid increase in car sales in
Thailand1.
44What is referencing?
- The reader then uses the in-text reference to
find full bibliographic information (about when
and where the source was published, and by which
publisher) either at the end of the page or more
usually at the end of the paper (as a footnote),
thesis or book (depending on the referencing
system used). - A referencing system that in the text uses the
author's family name will always list sources on
the references page alphabetically by author's
family name a referencing system that uses
numerical in-text references will usually list
sources in the order in which they appear in the
writing (not by author's name). - This enables the reader to find sources easily.
45What is referencing?
- Problems
- Mixing two referencing systems. If you are using
(name year) for your in-text references, do not
list your sources by number on your references
page because your reader will be looking for the
author's name. Similarly, if you are using
numerical in-text references, you cannot list
your sources on your references page by author
name - your reader will be looking for numbers. - What should you do if there is more than one
author listed? For the in-text reference, for a
paper with two authors list by paper by both (for
example, Shaw and Clayton, 1996), but for a paper
with more than two authors list by the main
author and add et al. (literally "and the
others"), e.g. (Jones, Suzuki and Chan 1997) is
written as (Jones et al., 1997). Note do not
change the order of the names, i.e. you cannot
write (Chan et al., 1997) because Chan is not the
main author.
46What is referencing?
- Problems
- What should I do if there is no author listed?
Some articles are credited to organizations
rather than to individuals (e.g. many software
manuals) so the organization is listed as the
"author." Many on-line materials do not have an
author listed again, often the organization is
used or, if no organization owns the material,
then it is referred to by its title. - Adapting existing referencing systems for your
own work. Why make work for yourself by adapting
an existing referencing style? Use a referencing
style that is commonly used in your field and use
it yourself. Besides, strange, new styles will
only confuse your reader (and as a student, your
readers are your professors), and are often used
just because the writer didn't bother to follow
an existing referencing style! XUCS prescribes
the Chicago Style
47What is referencing?
- Problems
- What should you do if you want to use information
by Writer X that you have found quoted or
paraphrased in Writer Y? Your first choice should
be to refer to the original source. For example
you find a book by Honda published in 1993 that
says "A study by Singh (1990) has shown that 60
of clowns suffer from chronic depression". If you
want to use this information, try to find the
study by Singh and read it for yourself. If this
is difficult or impractical, you should indicate
where you found the information. You cannot
attribute the information simply to Honda (as
that writer was not the person who did the
research) and you cannot attribute it to Singh
(unless you have read Singh's study). Instead, in
your research, you will write something like
this - Previous research supports this argument, since
it has been found that 60 of clowns are
sufferers of chronic depression (Singh, 1990,
cited in Honda, 1993). - This shows that you found the information from
Singh in a piece by Honda and that you did not
read the original, i.e. if there's a mistake,
it's Honda's not yours!
48What must be referenced?
- all work done by other researchers, and that you
want to refer to in your own writing. - other writers' words
- You must reference all information and ideas from
existing work that you use in your writing,
whether you use the source's words or your own.
All information that is not referenced is assumed
to be general knowledge (in your field) or to
come directly from you, so neglecting to
reference someone's work often means you are
leading your reader to believe that the work is
your own (i.e., plagiarism ).
49What does not need to be referenced?
- general knowledge (e.g. that George W. Bush is
the President of the U.S.A., that China has a
larger population than Thailand), - information that is common knowledge in your
field, and - ideas that are definitely your own, and findings
or insights from your own research.
50Problems
- What should you do if you find that your idea has
already been published by another
writer?Acknowledge the other writer's work, for
example by writing in your reference something
like (see also Wong, 1993). You must not ignore
the other author's work, because your readers may
think that you have either taken the idea or
information without referencing (this is
plagiarism) or that you do not have a good idea
of the literature in your field.
51Problems
- What should you do if you want to use an adapted
version of someone else's work?You must still
cite the original work. For example, maybe you
are using a diagram from an article by Wattana
published in 1996, but you have altered it.
Reference the adapted diagram as (adapted from
Wattana 1996). You can also use other terms in
order to specify the exact relationship between
the source and the version you have presented
e.g. based on Wattana 1996, summarized from
Wattana 1996, etc.
52Problems
- What should you do if several authors have
published very similar information or ideas? You
can indicate that the idea or information can be
found in the work of more than one author, e.g.
Though in fact many authors have described this
kind of system (for example, Hynes, 1989 Wu,
19991 Lefrère, 1994) little work has been done
on extending it to application to robotic
systems. If you only reference one author, then
your readers may assume that only one author has
published this on this topic, or that you have
not read the literature thoroughly and are not
aware of the other work published in this area.
Use your referencing to give your readers a clear
idea of the situation, not a distorted one, and
to demonstrate your knowledge.
53Problems
- Should you avoid referencing other people's
work? Referencing other people's work is NOT a
sign of weakness in their own work. In fact, the
opposite is true. If you write up your research
with no references to previous work, you are
indicating to your reader that you are not
familiar with the research that has already been
done, and are therefore undermining your own
credibility and the validity of your own work.
Including references is a way of demonstrating
your knowledge of your field - therefore you
must refer to previous work.
54Problems
- What if I find exactly what I want to say in
other people's writing? It depends on what it
is if someone else has done the same thesis as
you, then you're going to have to change your
topic, or find something new to say about what
you're doing. - If it is someone else's particularly succinct
expression, but fits perfectly what you have been
trying to say, you can quote directly, citing the
page reference as well as the author and year of
publication.
55Different Referencing Systems
- Chicago style this referencing system is used
widely in science and technology, and in some
fields of the humanities. The in-text reference
uses the family name of the author/s plus the
year the work was published - In-text reference(Smith 1978) Note no
comma between name and dateOR . . . according to
Smith (1978) - If there are more than two authors, generally the
name of the first is used followed by the words
"et al." (which means "and others").E.g. - The yield has substantially increased since 1993
(Wong et al. 1997).
56Different Referencing Systems
- References pageThis page comes at the end of
the paper, thesis or book (but before any
appendices) and has full bibliographic
information. In other words, it provides all the
publication (or other information about the
source) that readers need to either find it
themselves or to assess its validity. It contains
a list arranged alphabetically by the last name
of the main author and only includes works that
have been referred to in the text (i.e. that have
in-text references. E.g. - Smith P. 1988. An argument against wet paddy
mechanization of wet paddy agriculture. Journal
of Rice Production, 8 34-60.Wong, X., M. Singh
and P. Duncan. 1997. Increasing rice yields in
wet paddy. Agricultural Review 15 167-191.
57Different Referencing Systems
- APA (American Psychological Association) Style
This system is primarily used by those writing in
the social sciences. It is similar to the Chicago
style. - In-text reference(Smith, 1978) Note comma
between name and dateFor referencing a quotation
or specific part of a source "Development will
be slowed by such a move" (Smith, 1988, p. 80)
58Different Referencing Systems
- References pageAs for the Chicago style, only
works referenced in the text are included, and
are listed alphabetically by main author's last
name. E.g. - Smith, P. (1988). An argument against wet paddy
mechanization of wet paddy agriculture. Journal
of Rice Production, 8, 34-60.Wong, X., Singh M.
Duncan, P. (1997). Increasing rice yields in
wet paddy. Agricultural Review, 15, 167-191.
59Which referencing system should be used?
- Chicago Style or APA Style
60Referencing Online Sources
- Referencing systems for electronic sources are
becoming standardized (so do not try and
reference sources by inventing a system yourself
or adapting an existing non-electronic system!). - The in-text reference should follow the same
format as for printed sources however, the
bibliographic information on your references page
will be different and generally requires you to
include the type of resource plus when it was
accessed, as well as the URL for on-line
sources. For example, - American Council of Learned Societies (2000).
"Fulbright Economics Teaching Program, Ho Chi
Minh City, Vietnam". Available online
http//www.acls.org/pub-list.htm. (Downloaded
May 10,2000).
61Referencing Online Sources
- For further information, consult the following
link - http//www.dartmouth.edu/sources/contents.html
This site gives a complete, clearly organized
summary of all the main issues involved in citing
sources. - University of Southern Mississippi This is a good
reference site for APA style. - Andrew Harnack and Eugene Kleppinger have
published a book on citing Internet sources
called on Online! The book's website has
excellent advice on each style. For APA
http//www.bedfordstmartins.com/online/cite6.html
1For MPA http//www.bedfordstmartins.com/online/
cite5.html1For Chicago http//www.bedfordstmart
ins.com/online/cite7.html1 - How to Cite Electronic Resources from Williams
College, Williamstown, Massachusetts - Citation Guides for Electronic Documents from the
International Federation of Library Associations
and Institutions.
62Quoting and Paraphrasing
- A quotation is the use of your source's exact
words in your work. - A quotation may be as short as one word but, if
that word is significant, it must be put in
quotation marks and referenced.
63Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Quotations should include the exact words of your
source inside quotation marks, e.g. "Everything
we do is an experience of a kind" (Kenny 1996
45). If you look in Kenny 1996 at page 45 you
will find the words Everything we do is an
experience of a kind with no alterations or
omissions. However, you can make changes, if
necessary, as follows - leaving out a word or wordsORIGINAL"In many
academic circles in America, literary translation
is still considered a secondary activity,
mechanical rather than creative, neither worthy
of serious critical attention nor of general
interest to the public" (Gentzler 1993 34). - SHORTENED"In many academic circles in
America, literary translation is still considered
a secondary activity . . . neither worthy of
serious critical attention nor of general
interest to the public" (Gentzler 1993 34).
64Quoting and Paraphrasing
- No matter how many words you take out, you only
use three dots (except if the quoted sentence
comes to an end, in which case you use three plus
a full stop, i.e. four). Also, there is no need
to use en ellipsis ( . . . ) at the beginning and
end of each quotation.
65Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Note the use of page numbers here - in this
case, the quote is borrowed from page 34 of
Gentzler's 1993 publication. You should always
give page numbers when you quote text directly
from a source. - making small alterations/clarifications
- ORIGINALRaymond (1996) argues that,
"The people never knew what good food was"
(p.245). - ALTEREDRaymond argues that "the
people in England never knew what good food
was" (1996 245). Here the writer clarifies who
"The people" are, and changes capital T to small
to fit the writer's sentence structure.
66Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Quotations should be included in your sentence.
For example - INCORRECT"Everything we do is an experience
of a kind" (Kenny 1996 45). - CORRECTIt can be argued that "everything we
do is an experience of a kind" (Kenny 1996 45).
Here the writer has included Kenny's quotation in
his/her own sentence. - The quotation should fit grammatically into your
sentence - so choose the point at which to start.
67Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Quotations must be indicated with quotation marks
(" . . .") unless you are using a long quotation,
in which case it should be set in an indented
block - This is a long quotation and so is not shown by
quotation marks but by being set in a block that
is indented and usually single-spaced. - The exact style of indentation (e.g. indented on
one side or both, indented by three or five
spaces) will depend on the style you are using in
your work (e.g. Chicago, etc.) (Brightwell, 1998)
68Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Quotations should be kept short and kept to a
minimum (i.e. only use quotations when the words
themselves are important). - Avoid using a large number of quotations as they
mean you are letting your sources present ideas
instead of you presenting your own.
69Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Paraphrasing means putting an author's ideas or
information into your own words - Original "This has led to the conclusion that,
out of the US population at large, 90 watch
television to excess" (Wu, 1994). - Paraphrased"In contradiction to Suzukis claim,
Wu argues that 90 of Americans watch too much
television (1994)". - There is no need to use Wu's exact words as it is
his information (not his words) that is important
here. Notice too that with paraphrasing it is
easier to comment on the work you are referring
to (e.g. here it is compared to Suzuki's). It is
also not usually necessary to give page numbers
when paraphrasing. - You should be careful to indicate which are your
ideas and which are the author's by careful use
of references and by where and how you break
sentences. This is a subtle art and you should
look at published work for examples for how to do
this effectively.
70Quoting and Paraphrasing
- Paraphrasing must include page references. This
is necessary, as you are claiming that the quote
you are reproducing is authoritative the reader
needs to be able to check the exact point in the
text to which you refer. - Paraphrasing is more generally used than quoting
as it enables you to comment on, evaluate and
summarize information - Paraphrasing can be used with quotations (i.e.
you can quote within a paraphrase) - Paraphrasing must always be referenced (because
you are using someone else's ideas or
information) - Paraphrasing is never enclosed by quotation
marks or indentation - Paraphrasing does not mean a word-for-word
rewrite of the original (usually you are
summarizing your source or highlighting one or
more points).
71Plagiarism
- This means using someone else's words, ideas or
information without referencing them - in other
words, presenting them as your own. Any work that
is not referenced is assumed to be yours, so
ensure that this is true. - Plagiarism is considered a serious academic
offence in most academic institutions (see XU
Student Handbook) - To avoid it, use quotations and paraphrases with
proper referencing. When you are reading, keep
careful notes of your sources, including all the
bibliographic information that you need to write
a full reference for the sources.
72What may be considered an Authoritative
Literature Search in Computer Science?
- Local (Northern Mindanao/Mindanao)
- XUCS Research Page Department of Computer
Science, Xavier University (http//courseweb.xu.ed
u.ph/courses/research/index.html) - Methods of Research in CS Page Department of
Computer Science, Xavier University
(http//courseweb.xu.edu.ph/courses/msit121/) - XU Main Library Web Site Xavier University Main
Library (WebOPAC, Online Databases including
Wilson OmniFile and EBSCO Databases) - Web Sites of Schools with CS/IT Research Programs
MSU-IIT, CU, LDCU, ADDU, DZU
73What may be considered an Authoritative
Literature Search in Computer Science?
- National
- Web Sites of Schools with CS/IT Research Programs
ADMU, DLSU, UPD, UPLB - Web Sites of Government Organizations ASTI,
PCASTRD, SEI, - CS/IT Related Research Conference/PublicationsPJM
IT, PJS, CSP (Computing Society of the
Philippines Annual Computer Conference)
74What may be considered an Authoritative
Literature Search in Computer Science?
- International
- IEE INSPEC Database(http//www.iee.org/publish/in
spec/)Produced by IEE - ResearchIndex(http//www.researchindex.org)
- Association for Computing Machinery
(ACM)(http//www.acm.org) - Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers
(IEEE)(http//www.ieee.org) - Theses and Dissertation Database (of Computer
Science Departments of Universities)
75Some Recommended Computer Science Sites
- Networked Computer Science Technical Reference
Library An international collection of computer
science research reports and papers made
available for non-commercial use from a number of
participating institutions and archives. - Computer Science Directory A well-organized
search capability for computer science papers and
algorithms. - National Science Digital Library Provides search
capability plus links to other libraries. - Computing and Information Technology Interactive
Digital Educational Library Contains a useful
and growing collection of resources - Collection of Computer Science Bibliographies A
collection of bibliographies of scientific
literature in computer science from various
sources, covering most aspects of computer
science. Updated monthly has nearly one million
entries. - INFOMIME A virtual library of Internet resources
relevant to faculty, students, and research staff
at the university level. - Links for Computer Science Researchers An
excellent collection of links.
76Literature Review - Exercise
- Develop an outline/initial draft of your
literature review chapter based on the
suggestions and recommendations in this lecture. - Due on August 24, 2004.