Writing a persuasive advert

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Writing a persuasive advert
What is it you are selling? Why do people need
it/who will need it? How will it change their
lives? Where can they get it? How much is it?
(show value for money)
Our Ideas
Rocket powered wheelchair
Extra Robot arms
Magic Flying Carpet
Invisibility Cloak
Magic do the work for you pencils
Rocket powered heelies
Remote control Teacher
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Different Slogans

• Legoland Where creativity meets Fun!
• The Designer Wedding Show the exceptional, the
  exquisite.
• Tesco every little helps
• Asda Asda price (taps back pocket!)
• PC world where in the world pc world!
• Oxy action one scoop and the jobs done for you.
• C Bang Bang! and the dirt is gone!
• Coco pops wed rather have a bowl of coca pops
• National Lottery Think lucky!
• Daz turns horrible grays into dazzling whites
• Mr muscle Loves the jobs you hate!

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Language Features
nevertheless
because

Present tense (as if its happening)
consequently
however
As a result..

Logical connectives
Ifthen

Connectives showing the move from one point to
another
First of all
then
next
secondly
finally